The combat in chapter 35 was...well there were a few minor changes to make. This one was less on combat and more on consequences though.
Didn't change much in chapter 36. A few typos, changed some wording is all.
This chapter is kicking my ass. I'm so close to being done with it. It tells another part of a very familiar story in the MLP universe but from a different perspective. I didn't realize until I got to it, that there are a lot of questions I have. I'm filling them in, coming up with how I imagined things played out and why. I REALLY don't want to rewatch the episodes since I've seen them enough. All in all though, this chapter should be fun! Thanks again for being fans! Chapter should be ready
Cadence: You lying, cheating piece of shit. You aren’t the stallion I married!
Shining: Fine! We’ll get a divorce, and I’m taking Flurry!
Twilight, pulling the Monopoly game away from them: Maybe we should stop playing...
Doesn't matter if I'm a Sociopath or not. I'm here on this site... I am STAYING on this site... and there's NOTHING... you can do about it.
People still get up my butt for having Count Logan (a cursed, reincarnation of Beast Boy) Kill the infant by pulling off her head like a cork.
Well, there WERE alternate ideas, but none of them would have mattered anyway if I had done them.
Instead of having him pull off Flurry's head...
By Dawn's Early Light Part I of two is published. Read it now! The time is approximately three years prior to The Canterlot Wedding. A somewhat more innocent Cadance is learning about love, but wants to clobber Starlight Glimmer because she hurt Shining Armor. Yes, she's protective of her coltfriend, but when Starlight mentions the Do-Nothing Prince, she reacts jealously.
Hello everyone! Hope you all are having a nice day today. I wanted to start by saying just how sorry I am for missing my previous deadline. The last few weeks have been pretty busy for me, and I was aiming to upload chapter 8 right before I left on vacation. As you can see, that didn't happen, but I was able to finish up and get it out, albeit a week later then I intended. I want to promise updates in the future will be more regular, but that would depend on life not throwing any more
The time to post chapter 6 draws near. However once again I need editors. The chapter has about 8k words.
So if are interested to help me edit please PM me.
I don't blog about readings all that much, but when I get ones that really raise the bar, I do like to show them around a bit. This one is definitely one of those.
Read by Skijarama, it includes sound effects, atmosphere, musical bits... and basically everything I would want in a good reading.
So, give it a listen! Kid Twilight is still cute, isn't she?
We turn once more to the official novels, and this time it’s a new author. Let’s see what the human world has to offer.
It's been one heck of a ride with this series. With the final chapters out and the final edits made, The Ghost of Coltistrano series has finally come to a close... for now. Who knows what stories might come in the future, but for now the series has earned its rest. Huge thanks to Odd_Sarge for all their help and support, as well as the continued readers who've taken this journey with me. It's been unforgettable!
Okay so decided to edit chapter 12 another time because...well it's super long. But anyways I got the next chapter ready to go so keep an eye on your feeds tomorrow! Thank you all for being patient! This next chapter's a dousy so do me a solid and leave me some feedback please and thank you!
I know I haven't posted anything in a while, my life got flipped upside down. not gonna bother going into detail, just the next chapter of KOTD that I wanna edit is a big one. I'm saving the next new chapter for when I feel that my beginning chapters are better. I'd like to draw more people in and I'm sure after they got halfway through the tragedy of chapters 1-11, they probably gave up.
Aaaaaaaaaaand right off the bat, it's incest. Welp, I don't want to start refusing stuff right away, and as far as I can tell this isn't a crackship - I know a fair amount of people who are into this, actually, so I'm going to give it my best shot.
Next-level this, basically.
Name: TwiShine (Twilight Sparkle x Shining Armor).
Hope you enjoy it!
The ever-amazing Mix-Up was kind enough to make a piece of cover art for D&D, which can now be found on the story's page.
Go check out his DeviantArt page: https://amalgamzaku.deviantart.com/gallery/
And his FimFiction page: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/195663/Mix-up
I keep looking at how many chapters I've edited, vs how many I have to go and it just seems so daunting. I know later chapters will be a lot easier, like 20s or so, but still....
Holy crap there were so many typos! I'm friggin shocked! I thought I had written this when my standards had improved, but apparently not! Maaaan editing 8.8k words takes a while. I'm happier with it though. A lot happier. It looked like it had never had a spellcheck before though, which is weird cause I coulda swore that everything after chapter 20 was put through microsoft's reviewer thing. You see, this was back before I found out that Gdocs spellcheck was awful, and loved to change "its" to
*Cracks neck* sweet lord these long chapters are murder. I mean yes they're long, but I've read them so many damn times, especially this chapter. I had spent a long time trying to make the descriptions short, sweet, meaningful and poetic. I still saw some previous dialogue problems, back when I'd say the body language of who's talking, then put in a comma, followed by the dialogue. Granted this was one of the first scenes I wrote before I had actually began the story. Before chapter 1 was even
Another longish chapter, but I think I started editing this one but never finished. There was a lot of basic dialogue that needed some sprucing up and plenty of room for more flavorful vocabulary everywhere. Didn't see much in the way of editing, besides a few unclear descriptions and actions. The ending seems s tad cliche, but this can't really go any other direction. It may also be that I'm tired of re-reading all these chapters over again. I'll confess though, these later chapters are