KOTD Chapter 16 edited · 8:36am Dec 19th, 2017
Another longish chapter, but I think I started editing this one but never finished. There was a lot of basic dialogue that needed some sprucing up and plenty of room for more flavorful vocabulary everywhere. Didn't see much in the way of editing, besides a few unclear descriptions and actions. The ending seems s tad cliche, but this can't really go any other direction. It may also be that I'm tired of re-reading all these chapters over again. I'll confess though, these later chapters are alright since they've gotten the least amount of attention overall. Before I went on a massive overhaul, I mainly focused on the beginning chapters that depicted setting and characterization. I'll be getting a new chapter out soon. It's mostly done, I just gotta spruce it up a bit and connect some scenes together.
Later everyone!
