To be more precise, I edited and revised it.

I somehow attracted the attention of the irreplaceable Georg and grudgingly submitted to gratefully accepted his assistance, which was particularly invaluable due to his experience writing children's stories.

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EThe Lazy Dragon of Dragonvale

• MLP: FiM
• Slice of Life

Once upon a time there was a very lazy dragon who did not want to find a town to pillage. So he decided to make one of his own.

• OC
• Starswirl

Georg · 3k words  ·  1,858  19 · 19k views

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Hello, my fellow bronies~<3 I'm posting this blog because I need advice. Am I doing anything wrong with my story? I've noticed two downvotes out of 12, and I'd like to speak to the minority for a minute. What do YOU want to see from me? I'd love to improve so that you're satisfied.

So, having seen the latest installments of Pony Life... it actually gets better. And, yes, deeper.

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Thanks to a friend I am finally seeing the improvement I want in digital art. I am very happy right now with this and what I'm about to show.

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Hey everyone!

I know I did some editing a while back, but the other day, I realized that the scene with the cocoa beans in Episode 2 could be improved, and because of that change I also had to do a bit of editing on Episode 4 as well. I think that scene in Episode 2 is a lot better now than it was before, and it shows off more of Frosty's personality early on, revealing her promiscuity. Go ahead and check out the changes!

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In terms of personality, backstory, design, etc., what do you think I should change Odium into make him a better OC/character and why? Can someone give me a specific answer for how to do that besides just vague answers like "his existence" or "make him better"?

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So hi there!

I've been thinking and in order to improve I should probably not stick to a weekly release schedule giving me more time to make sure the chapter is better, and that I actually improve, by being able to spend more time on the work. That being said I'm shifting to a bi weekly release for Their Most Faithful Student.

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UPDATE NOTES:
>Removed all fun
>Removed RP's
>Removed Blogs
>Removed Non-Clop Stories
>Removed "Social-Network like" hashtags.
>Removed hashtags
>Removed hashtags again
>Removed (FUCKING) Notifications
>Added Intro Document for all members
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Gl3rc0qp5iseDp9mqZT2WaAdcoAbXU4x3-U3TRqeTHg/edit#

As the title states I am accepting prompts, ideas, and just genre recommendations in general. Read below if interested in giving me one, then comment below. and if you have any questions feel free to ask.

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This is basically an overview of what I've been doing for the past month. I can tell you now that I've been slacking quite a bit and not because of my workload; it's pretty simple of what I have to do at school. I've been doing some other things like playing games, resting constantly, participating in events and much more stuff I thought I wouldn't be a part of. There are even a couple* times that I think about writing more but I lose motivation to do so.

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Recently, I've written a new story called "Mindscapers".

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Today was the most productive day as far as caring for myself that I've had in awhile. I've gone from 10% energy to 50% energy. It took awhile to get to this point to where I could care for myself, but it's working out.

All of you make sure you take time for yourselves too. <3 It's important to stay in tip top shape. You can't do physical/mental/emotional labor all the time. Hopefully I'll be back to writing full stop in a couple days.

ANNOUNCEMENT: As of today I have Uploaded a New and Improved Prototype Story in which I will observe how it will go and if you all would like it so feel free to thumbs up of thumbs down

Thank you All for you cooperation......

It's been a while since plugged one of these, but The Writeoff is about to host another pony Short Story round. Stories must be 2,000-8,000 words in length, set in the FiM universe, and somehow relate to a prompt that will be posted in exactly 26 hours. You'll have 72 hours to write your masterpiece, and then the best part begins!

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I think so.

Any tips for better writing?

Someone asked "What more do I want" The answer is "Revenge"

People are still questioning my dislike of certain kinds of improvement...

Well let me ask you this...

-Suppose I got a job, and I made enough to finally move out and take care of myself.
-Suppose my job "contributed to society," and did something "productive"

Now consider this...

-I don't like it...

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I need some material to write down a list of my writing's pros and cons in order to improve for future writing. Can someone help me figure out what worked and what didn't in my writing overall?

So as the title says, I will be changing the rating of my story based on my own independent decision to do so. I believe it will allow me to branch out and make the story a little more true-to-life, without sacrificing anything in the process. This will allow me to heighten drama, use any assortment of profanity I wish, and use any kinds of innuendos and naughty texts that fall into my lap freely, and without worry that it will be too much for the reading audience. It will also allow me to be

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Oh come all yee, people, bored and lacking purpose, oh come oh cooooome, to write horsewords with me! COME AND BE HELPFUL, IN MY QUEST TO FINISHISH, at least one bloody fanfic, AT LEAST ONE BLOODY FANFIC, JUST ONE BLOODY FIIIIIIIIIC!

(It's 'Oh come all yee Faithful', the Christmas song)

Also, once again, too lazy to twitch/picarto/other streaming services are available so have a G-Doc link and we shall suffice with comments and Chat.

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