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Jul
18th
2020

What do you think of Odium's brand new backstory? · 5:27am Jul 18th, 2020

What do you think of my MLP, antagonist, fan character, Odium's, backstory so far? Do you think it matches his personality and character/redemption arc? Here they are:

Backstory:

Many years before the series started, Odium was a young, well-educated, and analytical creature who was born into an honorable family. They taught him that whenever he sees injustice of any kind happening, he should tackle it head on in order to make sure that others don't suffer.

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Jul
13th
2020

I need some tips on appealing and unique character design for my antagonist, Odium. · 2:26am Jul 13th, 2020

As the title suggests, I need some tips for unique and appealing character design, so that I can use them to create a great design for my antagonist character, Odium, on my own. He's an anthropomorphic, bipedal, non-pony OC and I need some tips on how to give him a design that matches his personality, fits into the show's universe, and is visually distinct and interesting. Sorry if this is too much to ask and if I'm being too

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Aug
22nd
2020

What do you think will cause Odium's eventual relapse in the story? · 7:31pm Aug 22nd, 2020

Sorry to bother you all, but I need to find some good reason for causing Odium's relapse in the story. The reason for this is because I want his character arc to be more harder and more believable and realistic than the show's usual rushed redemption arcs (No offense).

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Jul
28th
2020

How to make a great, well-written, and fan-favorite OC? · 9:32pm Jul 28th, 2020

Hey there, everyone. I know I keep doing this a lot and I'm sorry if it's getting annoying, but I've created an OC named Odium and I've got some negative feedback about both him and his story, The Rise of Odium, that I'm working on. The negative feedback is only here in Fimfiction and I need some advice on how to make him a better OC for my story. He doesn't have to be perfect, but he can be very great. Sorry if I'm bragging or

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Aug
13th
2020

What do you think should happen to Odium in the falling action of the story? · 10:59pm Aug 13th, 2020

As the title suggests, what do you think should happen to Odium in the falling action of the story? After everything he tried to do to the Mane Six and their friends and tearfully realizing how ironically villainous and monstrous he's been acting towards them, what do you think he should do?

  1. Odium wants to go to Tartarus for eternity as a self-imposed penance for his actions.

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Aug
9th
2020

What do you think should happen to Odium during the Inciting Incident? · 2:04am Aug 9th, 2020

Which of these two choices for you think should happen to Odium that would start the plot of the Rise of Odium?

  1. Odium gets knocked out by Twilight during his first fight against the Mane Six.
  2. Odium flees after sparing one of the Mane Six, like Fluttershy, out of mercy and high moral standards, vowing to return for justice.
May
31st
2021

I'm going to get rid of Odium now. · 7:08pm May 31st, 2021

I think I'm going to get rid of Odium now. I know that some people like him, but now I'm starting to see why there are others who don't.

It's not his characterization or his backstory or design, but maybe his role in the story and his passive, instead of active, writing. I could be wrong, but now I know what the other side might be talking about.

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Aug
2nd
2020

I need help with writing my new song. · 9:39pm Aug 2nd, 2020

I'm trying to write a great, catchy, and interesting song for my fan-character named Odium. The title is called "Put Them In Their Place" and I'm trying to write well-written lyrics and think of a genre(s) that fit his personality, history, abilities, etc.

However, I'm having trouble doing that on my own.

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Apr
2nd
2021

Why is my OC hated so much? · 5:29pm Apr 2nd, 2021

Sorry to ask this again and I'm afraid that it looks like I'm still spamming, but as the title suggests, why is my OC hated so much? Is it because I've advertised him too much to the point of spam? Or is it because of his existence in general? If so, why or why not? Sorry to say this, but the latter feels kinda harsh to me and I've seen at least some people who still like him and/or think that he has a reason to exist. Still, I really want to know why.

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Nov
1st
2021

I've Deleted All of Odium's Stories and his Wiki Page. · 6:51pm Nov 1st, 2021

Thank you and you're welcome.

Oct
25th
2020

What do you think of this idea for Odium's character arc? · 11:58pm Oct 25th, 2020

Odium losing everything that he had during his journey after the Mane Six and their friends. The fact that he lost his home, his purpose (due to Cozbi tricking him into going against said purpose for years), all of the good deeds that he's done throughout his journey (due to them turning out for the worse after he left), his morality and conscience (Which was the very thing that he was striving for ever since after his birth), and worst of all, possibly his family due to them being nowhere to

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Nov
25th
2020

Mary Sue Test: Odium · 9:18pm Nov 25th, 2020

For this part, add +1 point for each "X".
(X) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
(X) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.

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Sep
27th
2021

I've Finally Made My Decision. · 11:00pm Sep 27th, 2021

I've decided to get rid of everything Odium related, including Odium himself. The reason is because after thinking about it, it wouldn't be right to write a fanfiction about an OC beating up and going after the main heroes for misdeeds.

I know there some, or at least a few, people who actually like him, but I don't think others will like seeing someone beating up their favorite characters for their perceived misdeeds out of misplaced justice.

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Oct
31st
2021

What do you think I should change Odium into? · 9:36pm Oct 31st, 2021

In terms of personality, backstory, design, etc., what do you think I should change Odium into make him a better OC/character and why? Can someone give me a specific answer for how to do that besides just vague answers like "his existence" or "make him better"?

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Nov
28th
2020

Should I Delete The Day Of Reckoning? · 4:06am Nov 28th, 2020

Hey there, everyone. Due to the amount of feedback that I've been getting about both one of my stories and one of my characters and the fact that I've been constantly bothering others about them (And I'm sorry if I still am), I've decided that the best course of action would be to get rid of both of them all together. But first, I need your opinion on whether or not I should do it. If so, what do you think I should do instead? If not, then what can I do better?

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Nov
28th
2020

The problem(s) with Odium · 6:51pm Nov 28th, 2020

This is the last time I ask this, so I won't bother anyone again (Sorry if I still am, though). What could be the problem or problems with my OC antagonist named Odium? Is it his personality, his backstory, his appearance, his concept, or even his existence in general? Please let me know so that I can fix both him and his story in general.

Thank you and have a great day.

Apr
10th
2021

I'm going to give all the Odium stuff a complete makeover. · 2:00am Apr 10th, 2021

I've decided to rewrite the whole Day of Reckoning story in its entirety. By that, I mean, by given everything, including Odium himself, a complete makeover in order to make it a hundred times better than it was before. But first, I need to know all the problems that the current story and Odium had in order to make sure they're all fixed and improved. Can somebody do that for me through either a list, or more or less a paragraph?

Sep
5th
2020

I need help with Odium's new emotional song. · 4:17pm Sep 5th, 2020

Hey there, everyone. Sorry to bother you again, but I'm trying to think of a second song for Odium. One that's very deep and emotional and shows his regret and guilt for his own actions and injustices, and his dream of making thinks right, both for his actions and the actions of others, unlike his first song where he wants to put the Mane Six and friends in their place (Side-note: I still haven't figured out how to write great lyrics for that song either). However, I'm having trouble with the

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Jan
29th
2021

Odium's Relapse (Last Ask For Help, I Promise) · 4:26am Jan 29th, 2021

Look. I know that I've been asking for too much advice and comments on both Odium and The Day of Reckoning story, but I promise you that this will definitely be the last time I talk about that.

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Sep
30th
2020

New chapter for The Rise of Odium. · 4:18am Sep 30th, 2020

If you want to see what the new chapter is like, here's a link to the story below.

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