Oct
31st
2021
What do you think I should change Odium into? · 9:36pm Oct 31st, 2021
In terms of personality, backstory, design, etc., what do you think I should change Odium into make him a better OC/character and why? Can someone give me a specific answer for how to do that besides just vague answers like "his existence" or "make him better"?
Sorry. It's just that I really want to know exactly what's wrong with him and how I can make into a better, or at least decent, character in more detail or with examples of what could make him better besides just "get rid of him" or "nobody likes OC's anyway".
I also don't like it when others change their minds about opinions like that on a dime for some reason. Again, sorry. I just want to improve and please others.
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5602375
What's wrong?
5602377
why does he need to be changed?
5602378
Because I'm started to see that he doesn't work, character-wise or story-wise. I just need to know what I should change him to in an in-depth explanation besides just his existence.
5602381
Once again, that's up to you to decide. It's not the readers' responsibility to justify a character's existence.
5602382
Okay. Happy Halloween!
He should stay a wolf and he doesn't have enough confidence in himself at first. But as he spends time with the Mane Six and they travel to his village, he finally finds the courage inside himself.
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Thanks.
5602774
You're welcome.