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Heroic412227


Hi, my name is Heroic412227, but you can call me Heroic. I'm new here and I love to see what this website has to offer.

Dec
30th
2020

My To-do List · 8:39pm Dec 30th, 2020

  1. Finish 7 stories before G5 comes.
  2. Finish 4 Songs for one of my stories
  3. Finish on writing seasons and episodes for my own TV Series
Dec
2nd
2020

I Need Your Opinion On My Own TV Franchise · 3:39am Dec 2nd, 2020

I know that this is more Sonic the Hedgehog related instead of MLP FIM related, but I'm working on a new fan-made, spin-off, TV franchise starring my Sonic the Hedgehog OC's and I need your full opinion on the plot/premise, characters (main and supporting), episode ideas, and central theme overall. I haven't written any actual episodes yet, because I'm still trying to think of some good ones to add to the franchise, but I still need your fullest opinion on the franchise so far. What do you

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Nov
28th
2020

The problem(s) with Odium · 6:51pm Nov 28th, 2020

This is the last time I ask this, so I won't bother anyone again (Sorry if I still am, though). What could be the problem or problems with my OC antagonist named Odium? Is it his personality, his backstory, his appearance, his concept, or even his existence in general? Please let me know so that I can fix both him and his story in general.

Thank you and have a great day.

Nov
28th
2020

Should I Delete The Day Of Reckoning? · 4:06am Nov 28th, 2020

Hey there, everyone. Due to the amount of feedback that I've been getting about both one of my stories and one of my characters and the fact that I've been constantly bothering others about them (And I'm sorry if I still am), I've decided that the best course of action would be to get rid of both of them all together. But first, I need your opinion on whether or not I should do it. If so, what do you think I should do instead? If not, then what can I do better?

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Nov
25th
2020

Mary Sue Test: Odium · 9:18pm Nov 25th, 2020

For this part, add +1 point for each "X".
(X) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
(X) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.

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Nov
17th
2020

Steven Universe: The Movie Review · 3:17am Nov 17th, 2020

Hey there, everyone.

This is my very first and only time that I get to review something, but I'm both very excited and a little nervous about doing it.

Since there aren't many reviews, if at all, about my favorite movie, Steven Universe: The Movie, or Steven Universe (TV Series) in general, I've decided to give my take on it.

Enjoy.


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Oct
25th
2020

What do you think of this idea for Odium's character arc? · 11:58pm Oct 25th, 2020

Odium losing everything that he had during his journey after the Mane Six and their friends. The fact that he lost his home, his purpose (due to Cozbi tricking him into going against said purpose for years), all of the good deeds that he's done throughout his journey (due to them turning out for the worse after he left), his morality and conscience (Which was the very thing that he was striving for ever since after his birth), and worst of all, possibly his family due to them being nowhere to

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Sep
30th
2020

New chapter for The Rise of Odium. · 4:18am Sep 30th, 2020

If you want to see what the new chapter is like, here's a link to the story below.

TThe Day of Reckoning
The Mane Six will have to face one last challenge.
Heroic412227 · 7.5k words  ·  21  25 · 686 views
Sep
5th
2020

I need help with Odium's new emotional song. · 4:17pm Sep 5th, 2020

Hey there, everyone. Sorry to bother you again, but I'm trying to think of a second song for Odium. One that's very deep and emotional and shows his regret and guilt for his own actions and injustices, and his dream of making thinks right, both for his actions and the actions of others, unlike his first song where he wants to put the Mane Six and friends in their place (Side-note: I still haven't figured out how to write great lyrics for that song either). However, I'm having trouble with the

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Aug
22nd
2020

What do you think will cause Odium's eventual relapse in the story? · 7:31pm Aug 22nd, 2020

Sorry to bother you all, but I need to find some good reason for causing Odium's relapse in the story. The reason for this is because I want his character arc to be more harder and more believable and realistic than the show's usual rushed redemption arcs (No offense).

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