I'm Going to Review OCs

Hey there, everyone. After some thinking, I've decided that, instead of trying to get my own OCs reviewed by others, I'm going to try something different and review others' OCs. It's a fun idea and I can't wait to see the OCs that others have made.

If you have any OCs that you'd like to be reviewed, please let me know and I'll tell you about my thoughts on them.

Thank you and have a great day! 👍

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[Swift Comet]

Here, I’ll let you review my OC Swift Comet.
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And Helios Dawn too.
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[Spazz Kid]

Niro.
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[Heroic412227]

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Thanks. First, I love the design for both OCs. The use of red, yellow, and white contribute to making a unique character that's very appealing and fits the series' use of color palettes in their character designs.

Speaking of which, the character designs themselves are very well-crafted and fit the series' animation style very seamlessly. Both designs look very cute yet dynamic as Swift Comet's design looks very cool and epic.

Also, Helios Dawn's story of being Celestia's son is very well-told and compelling as it explains who he is, what his backstory is like, and what his personality and relationships with the other characters are like in a way that introduces some interesting lore and character development that fits the series' while also being its own unique part of it due to it being fanon and a great interpretation of Celestia's background before the events of the series.

Though, I do have a few questions that are more nitpicks rather than any major problems I have with it.

• What is Swift Comet's story and personality like?
• Are both her and Helios connected with each other due to having similar color schemes and eye colors? How and why?

But aside from that, these are great characters, and I can't wait to see their own stories and how they develop throughout them.

[Lulamoon-Crystal]

These are old and used bases. But still how they mostly look like still (Well, how Stardust looks in g4’s artstyle and not how she looks in G5 or her true form) If i get more images of them. I plan to have them drawn since i usually just use bases to see if the design/colours look good together

Stardust Crystal
Former dragon
No cutiemark. About 10 years old
i.postimg.cc/ZqBPMZ9B/IMG-0746.jpg

Minty
Kirin
17 years old
i.postimg.cc/5th5cGvP/IMG-0748.jpg

Since giving credit is nice. I’m just gonna link the owner to the bases i had used:
https://www.deviantart.com/maciethehedgehog/art/Filly-Pegasus-Sitting-Base-413776038
https://www.deviantart.com/starwolff-nyota/art/F2U-MLP-Kirin-Base-762451465