Am I doing anything wrong? · 7:27pm Nov 11th, 2017
Hello, my fellow bronies~<3 I'm posting this blog because I need advice. Am I doing anything wrong with my story? I've noticed two downvotes out of 12, and I'd like to speak to the minority for a minute. What do YOU want to see from me? I'd love to improve so that you're satisfied.
Dont worry about it this happen to almost every story on this site.
I like your story so far hope to see more
Word of advice: blogs aren't a good place to ask for advice, because only your followers and people browsing your profile see them. You should try posting about this in a group which specializes in helping new authors, like the Writer's Group, School for New Writers, Proofreader's Group, and "I Just want a Comment".
A cursory glance over your story tells me you have a concept worth exploring more than it has been already (HiE is a common genre) and you seem to be doing a good job with it, but you need to work on your English. There are a lot of grammatical errors and sentences which don't flow well, and your writing seems to lack flourish or tone. You should probably spend more time revising chapters after you draft them and ask if one of the people reading the story wants to proofread for you.
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Thank you very much for the advice. I also thought it was a bit... Rigid.
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Also, thank you, I didn't know that about blogs.