What started out as a joke turned into something more and gain a bit of a following. I have had many positive things said about the story, I have received many nice review, but I have yet to work on the story in over a year do to the fact that I do not know where it is going. I lost the motivation of the joke some time ago, and I feel like I am written into a corner almost. While I love the people who have Favorited and Liked this piece of fiction I want to change it. The extra character
So a third movie came up with the characters of the human world, ending with a climax that reflects the final act of the first movie with Human!Twilight becoming a power-crazed dark angel, and Sunset Shimmer becoming a fire angel to stop her... but both of them suddenly have horns...
Let me tell you why this bothers me:
Here's the art piece I promised of an upcoming chapter. I hope you all like and enjoy. You'll be seeing a lot of these characters as the story goes on.
Have to post a link instead of the art itself because FIMfiction sucks at allowing big art pieces.
Art done by saarablitz at deviantart. Commission her, do it. She's great.
This is Pinkie Pie's family tree that is based off of my two stories A Family Secret and The Battle Between Good And Evil
Adam (Biblical Figure) - Eve (Biblical Figure)
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Cain (Biblical Figure)
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Enoch (Son of Cain) (Biblical Figure)
Abel (Biblical Figure)
Seth (Biblical Figure)
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Enos (Biblical Figure)
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Kenan (Biblical Figure)
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Mahalalel (Biblical Figure)
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Jared (Biblical Figure)
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Enoch (Biblical Figure) (Methuselah's father)
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Hey folks! First off, I wanted to say a genuine thank you to everyone who's been reading, faving, and leaving nice comments on my latest story. I see a few of you were even kind enough to read the monster original "Everything's Better With Robots!" It really makes me happy to see people enjoying my work, and I hope that "Human After All" is something you will enjoy! So, since it's been a week after the first chapter's publication, I thought I'd offer a bit of information about
I hope all of my readers are enjoying chapter 7 of A Tale of Two Suns. As for me, I've had extra work to do around here. I'm tired, and I still have to do more.
But since I'm sitting down resting, I thought I'd just share some headcanon I had as far as geography in the EG human world. I'm referring to Canterlot, the capital of Equestria as "Canterlot", and the Canterlot in the human world as "Canterlot City".
Okay, hear me out on this. 'Bottled...water'
Bonus points if you get the reference
ANYWHOZITS
My actual idea...needs some explaining.
Twilight has a pet Owl
Rainbow has a pet Turtle
Fluttershy has a pet Bunny
Rarity has a pet Cat
Pinkie has a pet Gator
Applejack has a pet Dog
Now, make these their Spirit Animals
Now give them Magic Girl Transformations
Now add plot and villains.
Twilight - Wisdom, Flight, Night Vision, Nightowl?
Rainbow - Armored, Powerful, Teenage mutant?
I'm alit with inspiration and I also may be loosing my sanity a little bit.
A bit more comprehensive, story friendly explanation all characters within Our new friends, Our new enemies, non OC's included!
Major Characters
1) A human is discovered living in the Everfree, upon later investigation he (or it could also be she) has been living there several years, and has avoided ponies almost religiously. The human is discovered during a sweep against Tartarus escapees, or a changeling invasion, any really chaotic search and capture mission, so the Royal Guard aren't really interested in being gentle about things (frightened ponies do stupid things).
Hey so posted a new story yesterday.
Essentially: Cocky brony thief steals duster and would have gotten away with it if not for meddling cops. Goes to prison, god guy throws him down a hole, and he appears in another jail cell, as a dogger. Dogger meets a kitty cat, and the two escape into the open desert, and set out on a journey to Dragon Roost.
Seeing the first 13 episodes of Pony Meets World by Joey-O of Pecach Pictures, I kind of got an idea that the behaviors of ponies seeing something odd that they are completely unfamiliar with reminds me of the behaviors of American citizens during the 1950's. But what if all those ponies somehow, without noticing what's going on or realizing, got into our world during the 1950's, and more specifically, the U.S.? How would the Americans at the time react to seeing ponies like that for the first
As a writer, I'm pretty bad. I tend to have great idea pieces, but making a whole story, one where things flow properly and there's connection and what not, that's just not something I can do.
But I do have a lot of little ideas. Most of them are for Fallout Equestria. Because I like the setting. I just suck as a writer.
*It is night. Andrew and Fluttershy are sitting in a tree, gazing up at the gorgeous starry sky*
Andrew: It's gorgeous...
Fluttershy: *sighs* Y-Yes... I was afraid of the night when I was little.
Andrew: Me too, you know. When I couldn't get back to sleep late at night I'd wander my house because I was too afraid to stay in my room all by myself.
Fluttershy: *She nuzzles him* Mm... I would have gone with you. Then we wouldn't have been afraid... *She smiled*
I think anyone who's been paying attention can agree with the title, but she's largely been hiding how horrific she is behind "honest mistake" and "I didn't read the whole post" and "I just accidentally posted a transphobic message". But in the past few hours, she's stopped pretending.
For our collective benefit, here are all original characters used and created so far for my story Our new friends, Our new enemies. Included will be both major characters and minor, including named ones too, who have yet to show up in the story
Major
While Tirek rampaged around Equestria, the Mane 6 needed to buy some time. And there was only one being in all of Equestria that couldn't be drained of his magic, since he didn't have any. Of course, Twilight Sparkle would never let her beloved... Human research assistant go out on his own into danger. So she had forbade him from doing it.
This obviously didn't work...
Fluttershy: *Staring across the landscape, her eyes going wide in horror* "Oh no... SHEPHERD!"