Discord's power was something that always frustrated Twilight. All that power, with no effort, no cost. So when Discord offers her a chance to learn his secrets, Twilight quickly agrees. Unfortunatly all things come with a price.
Rainbow Dash finds a maimed, unconscious young colt on the edge of Ponyville and rushes him to the hospital, but nopony knows who he is and something about him seems off...
[Prototype 2]/MLP crossover. One of Alex Mercer's Evolved gets sent to Equestria, stricken with an obsession with security, can this untrusting being ever find peace if he does not allow himself to?
1758178 Well so far the story enjoyable. The way you write the action scenes are nice. I like what you did with the characters. I like that it's around 4 thousand word per Chapter. Also, I'm looking forward to what you are going to do with Ornstein. Other wise, there nothing to realy complain about.
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1758178
Well so far the story enjoyable. The way you write the action scenes are nice. I like what you did with the characters. I like that it's around 4 thousand word per Chapter. Also, I'm looking forward to what you are going to do with Ornstein. Other wise, there nothing to realy complain about.
Hello there! Thx for the add on Back Into the Light! What do you like or dislike so far?