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Casper B. Wordsmith


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Broken Promises Repaired? · 4:45am May 21st, 2013

A year.

A whole damn year.

Well, you wait no longer.

The finger is out, the document is open, the wine is in the glass.

The next instalment of 'The Sweetest Cider' will be coming soon. Even if it kills me.

Watch this space.

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hello there...I
just wanted to ask....you still gonna write this story of you? is had been a lot of weeks XD, I must say that I really really like it!
I just wanted to let you know hehe

Hullo.

I would like to bring it to your attention that y’are misspelling ‘y’all’ as ‘ya’ll’ often (unless you intend to make contractions of ‘ya will’ or ‘ya shall’).

I thank you for reading.

I just left a massive, gushing compliment on the story but jesus dude... Cider is such an incredible piece of work. I really can't wait to read more...

As a Londoner I loved the UKisms as well. Washing up, Manechester Utd, absolutely brilliant.

In short; "Why can't I hold all these feels?"

Rock on man.

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Like I said before, I wanted to take my time with this and make it a 'slow-burner'. Too often I've read stories that - whilst being good - pelt through everything at a tremendous pace which left me a little unsatisfied in the end.

Glad my style of ekeing things out seems to have won people over in any case. :twilightsmile:

Hey. No problem.

Thank you for writing it. Not to sound like a prude but there aren't too too many stories on this site that manage to really capture the same sort of heartfelt style yours did.

I mean, not to get too crazy into it but I certainly got a sense of feeling for the characters and conflicts that's somewhat harder to find with many stories on this site.

I'm looking forward to any future works you might put out in the future.

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