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Applejack suffers constantly from the same nightmares of being chased by the same monsters, with the occasional differing nightmare where she is instead drowned by a mysterious masked white pony. She goes to Twilight for help, but instead, an unexpected pony decides to tackle the problem of helping her.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 34 )

This is great. I've always wondered what it would be like for AJ to take a trip to Silent Ponyville. Can't wait to see how this goes.

That was very brillant and intense indeed.


All expect i found a small error

"Oh, hi Rarity!" Spike asked, completely forgetting about Applejack and nearly facepalming himself for not having noticed her earlier.


That's not asking, it should be Spike said in frustation in my optinion but keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks, I fix'd the problem.

i guess your using the wii version of silent hill for inspiration for this crossover?

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But of course. It's my favourite Silent Hill game.

Applejack is my favorite mare and I love finding these silent ponyville fics. This should be a fun read.

This was a sweet ending and story.Now as far as canon characters being in silent ponyville that makes pinkie,fluttershy,scootaloo,now applejack,princess celestia,and twilight. The later 2 I never got around to see if they were finished and how they ended but thanks to this I'm going to go find them again to see. Although a part of me wants to say this story felt a bit quick I still really liked it.

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I apologize for the extremely fast-paced nature of this story. I tried to emulate JakeHeritagu's slow, steady nature, but alas, I cannot seem to produce 19,000+ words of rising action. On the plus side, though, that leaves my stories to be extremely fast-paced, so they never linger on something for too long, something I felt that JakeHeritagu himself did quite too often. Am I claiming to be better than him? No. Just saying that we have different writing styles.

Still, I'm glad you liked it. I give you one heart :heart:

"Can you feel the sunshine does it brighten up your day don't you feel that sometimes you just need to run away." Sonic R refrence? I haven't even played Sonic R and know that's from the Tails Doll song.

This is great. Now to see what's next. :pinkiehappy:

Wow I must read what's next.:pinkiecrazy:

Next we get to see how it all ends. :pinkiecrazy:

I always liked Nappa actually and this was funny as heck. :rainbowlaugh:

Dang. Three game over endings. What's next?:pinkiecrazy:

She even thanked the killtr for making her stronger. I like this ending. :pinkiehappy:

"Can you feel the sunshine? Does it brighten up your day? Don't you feel that sometimes you just need to run away?"

Uh oh.
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Thinking about Rarity made Applejack upset. She missed her. She missed all of her dear friends. Fluttershy. Rainbow Dash. Twilight Sparkle.

Not Pinkie though, no one cares about Pinkie. :ajsmug::fluttershysad::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::twilightsmile: (no happy Fluttershy)

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It's done but there are six more chapters. WHAT IS THIS BLASPHEMY!?

How to obtain this ending?
I do not know. Or is this the ending of trueness, killing teh finalz bawz

This feels like a thing I would do in my story save for destroying equestria however, it would be canon.

Good so far, and would fit into Canon well. I mean it even explains why Twilight didn't mention it in SP3. That note though at the end... I didn't like it.

Also run applejack! Run from the default fimfiction avatar!

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Sry apljk...

Bit too rushed... I think that having fluttershy was completely poinless... I think that this could have been amazing with it drawn out more. At least to 6 or so chapters. That or make the existing ones much longer. I think without the fluttershy and Twilight encounter this could be pretty close to canon.

But it's just a dream... Why did frost form?

Please PLEASE come back and rewrite this! It's SO CLOSE to being not only canon, but extremely good! It's just to short, and needs a few things removed!

I must say, this Silent Ponyville story is reminding me of a Silent Hill game for the Wii, a game called Shattered Memories. It's a game I don't have, although I have seen a longplay of it. What that game has that this story doesn't are psychological tests.

I've only read two chapters so far, but the have been fun.

To say that something is recursive is to say that it refers to or calls itself. I must admit, I'm puzzled. How is this story recursive?

4271578 Silent Hill, don't question it, fear it.

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Oh don't bother with shattered memories. It's a crap "re-imagining" of the first game, and it was terrible.

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