You cannot just expect happiness, you have to create it. ~A great many people.
A stormy night, a homely mansion, and Diamond Tiara found dead.
The main suspect? Applebloom.
Can Rarity and Applejack clear her name?
(just wanted to try out this kind of story, may not be finished for a long time)
Special Thanks to LightOfTriumph for pre-reading this.
This is the first book in the Turnabout Equus series.
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Certainly well-written, but not my type of story.
~ Wywint
5639282 So don't read it. Now shush.
5639287 Sheesh! What's gotten into you?
~ Wywint
5639299 I'm currently playing a game.
5639308 What game?
~ Wywint
5639316 It's called attorney online
5639384 Ever played town of salem?
Play it.
~ Wywint
5639399 In a minute.
Great so far but needs more detail. Good luck with your story!
5649475 Thanks!
Dr Whooves as the judge!? You already have me hooked. In any case, the same opinion I have with the games is also the same I have here. I like the trial parts more than the investigations. And it shows. Keep up the story work and you might just earn your place in The Sorcerer's Hall Of Approval!
5758745 Well, I'll try, but this chapter only cam to me today. I had this on hiatus until I spent all day writing.
I am pleased with this chapter's outcome though.
I just need to try and figure out the next bit: Proving Silver Spoon innocent.
Thanks for the feed back!
5758752 A bit of advice from one author to another: add some more tags other than gore in your story. For instance, crossover since it is heavily based on the PW series. Gore usually tends to turn people away.
5758765 Hmm, why haven't I done that already?
5758771 You should also add it to many other groups to improve its popularity and for more feedback.
This game's winner is....MR. GATE AND WATCH!
But seriously, new chapter! Yay!
Your writing has gotten better since last time, I must say. Keep up the good work.
You can't forge fur. I'd say "planted" instead.
5845566 Thanks!
Hard to believe I did all that in only a few hours.
5845729 Indeed. Except the fact it wasn't.
silver fur could belong to silver spoon
6363561 Just keep reading. . .
Question. In Silver Spoon's first testimony, some of the text was green and some was turquoise. Why is that?
7087930 Either your eyes are playing tricks or I mistakenly used the wrong coloring
Apple Bloom is two words.
7111262 Eh
The answer is obvious. Silver Spoon is the murderer.
7141568 Hahaha
7141975 Are you saying Atlantis Productions was right?
7546464 You'll just have to read.