You cannot just expect happiness, you have to create it. ~A great many people.
Swift Justice was an average Pegasus, who was treated like a traitor by everypony. Almost broke and completely homeless, Swift goes to Las Pegasus to gamble, only to be given the chance to prove his loyalty.
But can he deliver the message in 30 days? And will his five new companions try to stop him? Or help him?
Mane Six tag added for involvement in later chapters.
From Swift's POV
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I like it
keep up the good work.
5627285 If you have any ideas for characters, look at this post.
Um, the pegasus is mine too.
:D
Promising so far, please keep this up!
~Wywint
5627581 Yeah, but I never mentioned the pegasi's name!
And yeah I'm gonna keep this up! It's not like I got a chapter where a pony who everypony thuogh- *slaps Paradox* Spoilers!
5627644
Just a bitty nitpick: did you mean "diaries" in the title? Because it says "dairies".
5628077 I'll fix it
MOAR!
~ Wywint
I like it
I can Hardly wait for the next chapter :)
5662483 Have you seen the hype post I did for the next chapter?
Find it here!
EPIC!!!!!!
Some one should do fan art or something.
I should really get a pic of Blank Slate done.
5723642 I agree, fan art would be EPIC!
Nice man.
Good to see this getting an update! I really like it so far!
Fanart=WIN
~ Wywint
5723762 ikr?
Also. . . . did you see my newest youtube video?
(Incoming insanity mode)
HAH! HOMMUNCULUS ALERT!
GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED!
FMA man. FMA.
I liked it, although the letter opening was confusing, what exactly happened there?
Also, BRIGHT BLADE BELONGS TO ME. XD (might wanna add that in the author's note somewhere...)
~ Wywint
Oh, and wingblades (a word wich almost autocorrected to Bangladesh) would mark Sun as a melee fighter, albeit one who could still keep her distance from an opponent.
Aurora's still got her Magnetite, Y'know. That stuffs combat capable.
~ Wywint
Just a note. It might sound better for Blank Slate to go by "Slate" instead of "Blank".... idk it just sounds better to me some how.
Other than that epic chapter.
Oh, and more nitpicks now.
When I said he had a 'rope dart', you probably should've googled that. It ain't a blowgun. Seriously.
But he does have that mini-crossbow.
And that certain hoof mechanism
And, to be fair, I don't think he'd go down that easily, but whatever. He was probably acting out of anger.
~ Wywint
5791833 Oh right. I will add that. And I meant for it to be just a daydream for Swift.
5791874 Right.
5791880 Thanks.
5791887 Maybe. I was writing in a rush, and I forgot the rope dart. And the mechanism. But he didn't anticipate a dark magic user.
Also, every reader of mine must have clean minds if no one is going to talk about the tentacles.
5791984 Dude, it's taking all of me and Cyclone's willpower not to say anything.
SO MANY JOKES
MUST RESIST.
~ Wywint
5791992 Oh. Okay then.
IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!
Also Amazing chapter!!
5971081 Yes, and next chapter will explain:
a. How Swift's dad escaped death.
b.How he became an Alicorn.
5971468
OOOOO cool I can hardly wait!!
[So when is the next chapter "scheduled" to come out?]
5971503 Sometime by the end of the month.
5971533
Awesome
*infinite joy*
Awesome!
~Wywint
Also These comments:
-Swift and the Gang aren't even Fazed by Bright's Metal hoof?
-Nobody Questioned Sunny's eye patch
-Sunny is good at her core, mind you. (At least, In Natz-Land she is.)
-Tourmaline has two 'l's the first time it's spelled.
-In the Author's note, Swift's name needs a ' between the t and the s.
~Natz
5975905 1. Forgot about the metal hoof.
2. Sunny's eye-patch wil be brought up in the next chapter.
3. And I have planned this before you gave me Sunny. All will be explained.
4-5: On it.
5975920 1. That's cool- He wore a glove or something XD
2. Just making sure...
3. Just don't turn her into an asshole
4-5. Good!
~Natz
5975930 3. Why? Tourmaline is supposed to act like an asshole. Not Sunny. Don't worry, most of the chapter is focused on her.
Now I have the desire to write again. Going back to the chapter.
5975934 I meant Sunny- And yeah, Tourmaline's job here is chief Asshole.
~Natz
5975982 You didn't understand my question. Why would I make Sunny an asshole? I have no motivation too, heck, I have motivation to do just the opposite. Your argument is invalid.
5975995 Goddamn, now you've confused me!
~Natalie
5976004 Let's just say it was never my intention to make her an A-hole and leave it at that.
5976007 DEAL.
~Natalie
YEAH!
Might want to add that Bright, without his metal hoof, just has a stubby forleg.
~Natz
5979329 Oh right.
Oh, also-
FMA FMA FMA (Wrath and Greed) FMA FMA FMA
~Natz
I really enjoyed this chapter! The look into Swift's mind was nice. Also how Second Sun decided to come clean (even though it was after the fact).
5986748 I'm having fun in the next chapter. Soon, all will know how Cardinal ascended to Alicorn-hood.
5986752
Awesome!!
of course blueblood is working with cardinal
5988973 So. . . . you have any guess to who the elements of disharmony are yet?
5988978
Ummmmm......
Trixie, Cardinal(of course), Blueblood (already revealed), ummmm can't think of anyone else who might fit off the top of my head.
5988999 Go back and read the last two chapters, at least one more is hinted.
5989745
So was I right on those?