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Night Fury the Black


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Guys I forgot to put this in chapter 1, so I'll do it here. The reason I didn't start out with Vaas coming to Equestria is because I'm trying to put it were its less and less from his POV, as he's the main antagonist, however, there'll be a couple chapters from his POV, so don't worry!

Ah, this is certainly going to be entertaining, and I've beat Farcry 3 (PS3) good end...epic.

A FAR CRY 43 CROSSOVER?????/ I GOTTA FUCKIGN READ THIS1!!@!#@!

Not bad, not bad. Definitely like how you did Vaas. While your intro was different, you used some of my ideas. I look forward to the next chapter

i like how you used alot of his monolouge, like in the end where you used his monologue from the first time you met him.

You know, I'm kind of hoping you keep Sky around. Sky seemed to just show up and disappear in the original story, and it would be interesting to see him act as the love interest for the story rather than the sacrifice. Plus he could be the one to show Fluttershy how to survive, as I'm pretty sure she couldn't survive in the area for long if Vaas was after her. Hope to see more of this soon, keep goin and stay golden^^

Chapter 2 will be up tonight guys....

I really appreciate it that you took time out of your days to read this story, even those who disliked it!

What a plot twist!

Why is something telling me that sooner or later, Sky is gonna get shot in the neck?

2393488 Actually, if I kill Sky, it will more than likey be because of a wound to the chest.

Also, if he dies, it will after Act III.

2395097 Hmmm, i thought he would be shot in the neck like grant because he kinda hebives like grant( he tries to get them out of there)

CIA

You know when I first saw the cover art and the description when it said 'after the bad ending' I expected Jason to be in it also. But that doesn't mean I'm not liking this story, hell this story is turning more good by the chapters.

[quoteFluttershy almost cried.Fluttershy almost cried?! If she had witnessed something like that she would've entered a state of total shock and fainted in an instant as soon as she recovered from it. When she finally she finally woke up she would be bawling her eyes out.

2402333 Well, jeez, sorry.

Like I said before, I can't impress everyone.

Besides, I'm gonna give you a little spoiler: Fluttershy's gonna cry....a lot.

CIA

Lets see how much blood is in ya!

Star pelted should survive the escape.

Sorry guys, but do to the fact that my job is keeping me a lot, and because I've got two new stories coming out(Gears of Equestria and Time and Fate), I won't be able to update for at least a week or two, but don't worry, I'll be back!

Can't wait 'till the next chapter. Until then, we shall listen to Daft Punk.

Comment posted by Night Fury the Black deleted Jun 4th, 2013

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I half ta ask...
..can you please update it in larger chapters? Sorry, just a lil' peeze of mine.

2824860 Sure, I've been taking a break from writing on FiMFiction for a while, about one more week, and I'll be writing again. While I'm going to get a chapter done on my other story first, after that comes the final chapter of Act I for this.

And yes, Chapter 5 will be AT LEAST twice as long as Chapter 4 was....

New chapters ??? Please

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