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Scavenging Otter


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After growing older, Spike finally gets to date Rarity as she feels he was old enough to do so. After about a year of dating Rarity feels as though their relationship is ready to be taken to the next level. Spike learns that the "next level" is to move in with her. Unsure about his decision he doesn't know if he wants to with fear of abandoning Twilight.

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Comments ( 18 )

Right in the feels.

Comment posted by beirirangu deleted Apr 1st, 2013

No words...no words can truly express my emotions on this heart wrenching tale. :raritycry:

Thank you so much for such a great story. :twilightsmile:

This filled me up completely. A true life lesson Spike learned in growing up. :raritywink::pinkiehappy::fluttercry:

Comment posted by Scavenging Otter deleted Apr 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by Path_of_cloud deleted Apr 2nd, 2013

Alright, alright, whatever guys. I got it. Should be all past-present tense now. I honestly didn't see it as that big of a deal since it really wasn't like, switching every sentence. It was more like every other paragraph, but whatever, should be all past tense now. Said, knew, hugged. Let me know if you see any present tenses and I'll change them.

The Dawwwwwwww level is over 8000!!!!!

Great!! This story was perfect. Lots of Twispike fluff, lesson learned, very well handled. Will you make more? Well not a sequel to this just stories in general?

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I'll think about it. I got some grimdark stuff i need to get to, but in terms of stuff like this, not sure yet. We'll see.

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Ehh. Grim darks not really my thing. With plot twist, sad ending, and over use of gore... I won't sleep right for 4 days. Oh well, are you strictly with Twilight and Spike being brother and sister?

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Yeah, i pretty much see it as completely platonic. I could understand where a sexual driven relationship could come from, but i kinda prefer the whole brother sister or mother son thing. It just kinda clicks.

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Yeah, I prefer a more intimate based relationship. Seeing them together is great, there's so many ways to go about it. Personally if they were to be familial relations, it would be brother and sister. I can see how people could say mother and son, but the age gap isn't big enough, 4-7 years max that cannot be a mother relationship but that would still be interesting to see.

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I've always seen it as a technicality, like more so Twilight with motherly instincts towards spike rather than actually feeling like his mother.

Alright kids time for a feels trip

Woah, I love finding these random awesome stories.

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