• Published 17th Mar 2013
  • 35,513 Views, 415 Comments

For Whom She Sparkles - JaydexTheShadowKnight



You visit Twilight with the hopes of helping her relax from being overstressed, only to discover she considers you as more than a mere friend.

Comments ( 18 )

Why isn't there an anon tag?

9856305
Because he's not called Anon, for one, and I highly doubt there's someone named Anon reading this. It's a second person story.

9856305
There is no mention of anon anywhere in this story.

Twilight looks so pretty in this picture. :rainbowhuh: "Rainbow, relax. I can still compliment other mares even though we are dating".

An elegant but forceful knocking on your front door tears you from your slumber.

I'm not going to lie, you had me going here for a moment.

I thought Rarity was at the door at first. :rainbowlaugh:

I am also now wondering what Pinkie story would be like coming from you. Would Pinkie be even more tooth-rottingly sweet? The world may never know.

Taking care of your mare: ☑
Your mare taking "care" of you: ☑ :trollestia:
Chapter cliffhanger: ☑
And just how does one knock "elegantly"? :rainbowhuh:

Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next one.

9859619
Elegant knocks require doorknocking accessories.

Well I read the hole thing so far and its ok, just not enough conflict to keep me interested in reading anymore, sorry...

I want more, SO MUCH MORE!

Are you going to finish the story

Oof, 2 years of cliffhanger...... really hope to see this updated at some point

10977746
I've got the next part in the works...finally. :twilightsheepish:

10985954
Ayyy, nice!! Better late, than never eh? I eagerly await the day it gets here boss.

Could you stop writing amazing stories and then stopping them at the best part
This is the 3rd story that I've read from you and I have absolutely loved them all except for one part. Through out all of them you stop updating at the worst point possible

Dead story is dead. :(

10985954
Nearly 2 years later, and not a peep since. Guess that's what I get for having hope.

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