I saw some wording which confused me. Is Twilight new to romantic relationships or has she had some before and it has been awhile and so she's rusty with the dating game? Because having both of these in the same sentence doesn't really work, I think.
Also, Spike makes faces of disgust when seeing his mother kiss the extraterrestrial. His poor young psyche shall remain scarred ... forever!
Probably my all time favourite Twilight & human fic. It is so cute and adorable, yet sexy at the same time. Please, don't leave us hanging that long again, that hiatus was terrible long... Looking forward to read more.
8181800 All Twilight simply meant by that is she's only been in a few relationships (this was lightly touched upon in chapter 1), and before she ended up with her human (you), it's been a while since her last romantic relationship. Hence her saying she's still pretty new as well as a bit rusty.
Actually, Spike has already met the human and seen him and Twilight getting a bit affectionate, refer back to chapter 3.
818297881832798183325 No, this story is far from dead. I'm so, so sorry it took so long to get it back on track. Too many issues outside, but things have vastly improved. At most it should only be a month or two till I update this again. I'll certainly make sure that two years don't pass again.
And I'm glad to hear you're all still enjoying the story. There's still a good deal to go. I'm not sure how many more chapters I'll do. I originally thought I'd have made it to Winter Wrap Up a few chapters ago, but didn't want to rush things. Originally I wasn't planning on doing this as more than a one-shot, but like several of my other stories, it's taken on a life of its own.
Thank for the updates. I'm glad you've come back to this one as well. I'm pleased that things worked out with Daisy. I was a little worried there. I'm hopeful that Twi and her human can keep the promise they made to each other and talk before letting things come between them. I get the sense that his former marefriends were only with him for noterity. I think Twi truly loves him and has for sometime. Probably longer than she realizes. They are good for each other. I look forward to the next update.
Is it just me or do the characters seem like spineless saps. The story is too nice and doesn't hold any weight behind it. I used to like this story, now I feel like it's forgettable.
9320411 I still think that the best Twilight with a human fanfictions on Fimfiction are here from #JaydexTheShadowKnight. I am genuinely looking forward to read more.
I'm glad we're getting all these amazing Twi fics now.
Great job.
8180677 do you have any recommendations?
Not usually one for human in Equestria stories, but this one isn't too bad.
going to follow this one, see where it goes.
good good show, lookin' good so far~
HJehehehe
I saw some wording which confused me. Is Twilight new to romantic relationships or has she had some before and it has been awhile and so she's rusty with the dating game? Because having both of these in the same sentence doesn't really work, I think.
Also, Spike makes faces of disgust when seeing his mother kiss the extraterrestrial. His poor young psyche shall remain scarred ... forever!
You have to be, you picked me after all.
Alright I reread the whole story, now I'm all caught up. Still always a great story
Probably my all time favourite Twilight & human fic. It is so cute and adorable, yet sexy at the same time. Please, don't leave us hanging that long again, that hiatus was terrible long... Looking forward to read more.
Das is good, Loved that newest chapter :)
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All Twilight simply meant by that is she's only been in a few relationships (this was lightly touched upon in chapter 1), and before she ended up with her human (you), it's been a while since her last romantic relationship. Hence her saying she's still pretty new as well as a bit rusty.
Actually, Spike has already met the human and seen him and Twilight getting a bit affectionate, refer back to chapter 3.
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No, this story is far from dead. I'm so, so sorry it took so long to get it back on track. Too many issues outside, but things have vastly improved. At most it should only be a month or two till I update this again. I'll certainly make sure that two years don't pass again.
And I'm glad to hear you're all still enjoying the story. There's still a good deal to go. I'm not sure how many more chapters I'll do. I originally thought I'd have made it to Winter Wrap Up a few chapters ago, but didn't want to rush things. Originally I wasn't planning on doing this as more than a one-shot, but like several of my other stories, it's taken on a life of its own.
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Is it bad that I read your comment in Discord's voice?
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I'm glad to hear it.
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Understatement is right.
A relashinship that can't be broken huh? Send in the Horde.static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/11116/111163272/3908859-5493121602-the_l.jpg
we will see how quick it takes for Equestrian soldiers to fight an enemy that digs up right up right beneath their feet
Thank for the updates. I'm glad you've come back to this one as well. I'm pleased that things worked out with Daisy. I was a little worried there. I'm hopeful that Twi and her human can keep the promise they made to each other and talk before letting things come between them. I get the sense that his former marefriends were only with him for noterity. I think Twi truly loves him and has for sometime. Probably longer than she realizes. They are good for each other. I look forward to the next update.
Is it just me or do the characters seem like spineless saps. The story is too nice and doesn't hold any weight behind it. I used to like this story, now I feel like it's forgettable.
i really hope there is more to come soon.. Absolutely loving this story.
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It's funny you should say that. I was just looking over my notes for this story and checking what I've got planned for chapter 7.
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I'm actually very happy to hear that. Looking forward to see more of this story. :)
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I broke ground on chapter 7 last week. I'm going to be working on it between a few projects.
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I still think that the best Twilight with a human fanfictions on Fimfiction are here from #JaydexTheShadowKnight.
I am genuinely looking forward to read more.
I want more!