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Mystical Rainboom


You may know of my power, but you may never know my limits- ?????

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changelings constantly attack canterlot and the mane 6 must go and help so spike must live in a new home with new ponies for a bit almost just like the others...

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Comments ( 7 )

Grammer aside this could be an interesting story as long as Spike has an more involved role. Though having a beta reader would really help make this story better.

Interesting, I'll give it that.

I'm okay with the content but it really needs a pre-reader.

It had someinteresting roles in it.:yay: But some of the grammar could have been fixed.:facehoof:
It was very good though!:raritywink:

Love,
-RainbowDash3000:rainbowwild:

Don't worry Spike will get his share along with the others I just need to think but here is what i can see next in this saga. Vinyl needs a job,Derpy chases one of her muffins, and octavia changes her complete personality I'll bring more later.and think of it tell then have a moustache :moustache:
- Mysticalrainboom :scootangel:

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