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Khakispony
An assembly of mediocre fics from a mediocre reviewer on ponychan as well as the place to go to if you want a mediocre review of smut.
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Hey everypony. My name is Khakispony And I'm delighted you've decided to read my story. First I'd like to apologize for any grammatical errors I've made. I'm no English professor, and have probably missed a lot of commas and other errors. Rest assured I will fix them as I encounter them but until then please be patient. Second I know the chapter ended sort of abruptly. The reason is so I can edit the story in manageable chunks. If I didn't stop it here the chapter would probably be about 10.000 words long and an absolute nightmare to edit. So again I will have to ask you to be patient if you really want to know what happens you'll just have to wait. Third thing I did like is for you to state your opinions. This is my first story and I'm still getting the hang of this. So if you think there needs to be more detail, less detail, or anything else I'll receive your critiques with open arms. That being said please keep it civil. I'm not going to respond if your comment goes like "OMG you suck LOL go kill yourself." Anyways thanks again for reading and have a nice day.
Loving it.
So far this is a very interesting story now if you would be so kind, as to pick up that golf club.......
Thanks you guys. The fact that it's getting such good feedback, is more than enough reason to keep making it. Still this will take some time, so at best expect bi-weekly updates.
Would you kindly write more?
I cant wait for pony cohen!
I would very kindly kick your plot you bad bad bad pony!!!
Such a wonderful twist in a game. I was like
and then I was all 
and then I totally went all 
on his cooky backside.
As for the story, a few mistakes here or there but hay, you should see my first attempt at writing, I believe my pre readers and editors said, "Kills it with fire!!"
I'm looking forward to more chapters so yes please. Moar.
Also, I should likely not post while half asleep...
Yay chapter 2 is finished
. Editing may be a little more sloppy than usual but Im trying to find any mistakes that I missed. This chapter is also shorter than the first but it also has nothing to do with the game. It was an interesting chapter to write and I hope you enjoy it.
I'd also like to thank you all for the great response so far. When I saw that there were ten people digging the story my face went to this
. Releasing the chapter early is my way of thanking you all. Please give me feedback. It is still as useful now, as it was when the first chapter came out. Thank you and have a nice day 
and another great chapter
Tracked! Good story so far. I think in chapter one you refered to Gene as Jack when he first gets to the light house though.
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. Jack was the working name of the main character when I started writing. Name got changed and I missed a change
Thank you for pointing that out and thanks for tagging the story 
Whoops. I derped big time there
As a huge bioshock fan, I have to say I am VERY impressed with where this is going
also love the use of gene tonic as a name, clever
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Hah. I thought it was the most played out name but okay then. Next chapter should be out in about a week or two. In the meanwhile I'm working on a fallout fic with a first chapter already posted and and trixie, twilight fic.
A bit of friendshipping?
I just realised. I'm the editor, so I get to see the new chapters before you! U jelly? U jelly.
What can I say guys. Another writer has done bioshock better then I could. It doesn't mean I'll stop but I understand if you want to jump ship. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18342/Harmony
Yeah, he does update a bit slowly. At least it gives me time to edit other fics, and maybe write my own.
that is exactly how I pictured pony big daddies :3