Yay chapter 2 is finished. Editing may be a little more sloppy than usual but Im trying to find any mistakes that I missed. This chapter is also shorter than the first but it also has nothing to do with the game. It was an interesting chapter to write and I hope you enjoy it.
I'd also like to thank you all for the great response so far. When I saw that there were ten people digging the story my face went to this . Releasing the chapter early is my way of thanking you all. Please give me feedback. It is still as useful now, as it was when the first chapter came out. Thank you and have a nice day
191771 Whoops. I derped big time there. Jack was the working name of the main character when I started writing. Name got changed and I missed a change Thank you for pointing that out and thanks for tagging the story
218639 Hah. I thought it was the most played out name but okay then. Next chapter should be out in about a week or two. In the meanwhile I'm working on a fallout fic with a first chapter already posted and and trixie, twilight fic.
What can I say guys. Another writer has done bioshock better then I could. It doesn't mean I'll stop but I understand if you want to jump ship. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18342/Harmony
Yay chapter 2 is finished. Editing may be a little more sloppy than usual but Im trying to find any mistakes that I missed. This chapter is also shorter than the first but it also has nothing to do with the game. It was an interesting chapter to write and I hope you enjoy it.
I'd also like to thank you all for the great response so far. When I saw that there were ten people digging the story my face went to this . Releasing the chapter early is my way of thanking you all. Please give me feedback. It is still as useful now, as it was when the first chapter came out. Thank you and have a nice day
and another great chapter
Tracked! Good story so far. I think in chapter one you refered to Gene as Jack when he first gets to the light house though.
191771
Whoops. I derped big time there. Jack was the working name of the main character when I started writing. Name got changed and I missed a change Thank you for pointing that out and thanks for tagging the story
As a huge bioshock fan, I have to say I am VERY impressed with where this is going also love the use of gene tonic as a name, clever
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Hah. I thought it was the most played out name but okay then. Next chapter should be out in about a week or two. In the meanwhile I'm working on a fallout fic with a first chapter already posted and and trixie, twilight fic.
A bit of friendshipping?
I just realised. I'm the editor, so I get to see the new chapters before you! U jelly? U jelly.
What can I say guys. Another writer has done bioshock better then I could. It doesn't mean I'll stop but I understand if you want to jump ship. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18342/Harmony