3897000 Wait, hush. *puts a hand to his ear* Do you hear that?
That's the sound of about a hundred clopfics burning, and a thousand being written to replace them
Seriously, I use these little random ideas too much. If anyone ever wishes to expand on them, feel free to. CoCoCon alone can spawn a whole genre of fics, and 'Twilight gets arrested for having a love life' can make for a few funny stories, too.
Those rubber socks are still there, waiting for me. I should’ve said something at lunch, but… nah, I don’t really need to get those right now. They are kinda expensive, even if they would feel nice.
Aaawwww, nooooooooo~ I wanted to see Rainbow in her desired socks! Why didn't Twilight brought them in secret to surprise RD, whääääähy?
Anyway, i think the kissing scene needs some do-over. A bit longer, a bit more on the feel side on Twi given that this was her first loving kiss, due the short and quick kiss it felt quite lackluster. Though the kiss itself can be short but the way to the kiss, and Twi's feels before and when it happens, could be a bit more descripted. Or maybe add some Rainbow in finding feeling uneasy about kissing while she is her "mistress" very cute or something.
She stopped her train of thought, and the sponge. With a mutter under her breath, she summoned a kitchen towel to dry it off, then put it back in the cupboard.
"it" is unidentified.
Rainbow did mention Thunderlane once or twice, perhaps she’s finally found a new paragon?
*paramour
I rather enjoyed the scene at the end in the train. It was a welcome and refreshing return to what passes for normalcy between Twilight and Dash in this story, and I felt the connection between them pretty well.
The entire arc of the con did a good job of being on the abnormal side, especially towards the beginning. I definitely got a sense of the pair acclimating to the weirdness as it progressed.
It's the little touches that make it especially nice, like Twilight referencing a book in mid-kiss. And I never considered how the rapid-fire morphological changes might have some lasting effects on her self-image. Very interesting, that.
I especially like the symmetry of changelings doing food service at an erotic paraphernalia convention. They give food, they get food. After all, with all those couples, there's got to be enough ambient love in the air.
And I have to wonder, just who is maybe-Trixie's partner?
I think Twilight's characterization in this chapter was spot on. Rainbow's too. I'm glad Rainbow sseems to be getting over Twilight's earlier betrayal and all. I'm also glad Twilight didn't get arrested for being a Twilight impersonator.
I wanted to see Rainbow in her desired socks! Why didn't Twilight brought them in secret to surprise RD, whääääähy? Who says she didn't, I'm sure there was a part saying that Rainbow didn't really know what was in Twilight's bags.
38970003897044 This is certainly true but Twilight is a Princess now, so she effectively owns public buildings, I think she could get away with it.
I'm not too sure about the last bit myself to be honest. I mean hilarious thought to say the least that's for sure , but I'd at least consider the upper floor as personal space for Twilight, it is her bedroom afterall. Then again...hm...I'm gonna be mulling over that thought for days now.
My guess is Unicorn to Alicorn, then Alicorn to Human in Equestria Girls. I guess her pretending to be an Earth/Pegasus pony during the convention (using her hooves, not magic) could be considered a species change, even though there was no real change to her body, rubber aside.
3897255 I might get back to it later, but the truth is it's still only an experimental kiss.
And yes, I am referring from unicorn to alicorn to human back to alicorn as two species shifts. Technically it's three, but the main distinction is growing and losing a pair of limbs, so I'm not counting the reverse as a species change.
3897632 I did actually look up the term, and I do mean 'paragon' as outstanding example. Paramour, meaning lover, would imply Rarity thinks Rainbow Dash is already seeing someone, rather than admiring a stallion she hasn't spoken to yet. I'm not sure how correct it is, but I have seen it used in that context, so I'm sticking to that. Did define the dish, though.
3899487 That's besides the point. The point is that Celestia put Twilight in a library for most of her adult life. You have to wonder if Celestia just assumed Twilight would never think to question the rules or just, you know, go out and breed. Like Celestia thought the matter would never 'come up' (pun intended). Now that Twilight is a princess, I'm sure it is fine, perks of the title and all, but Celestia still has to answer for everything before that.
Seriously, someone write a fic about that. And who was the librarian before Twilight, anyway?
Awesome story and it's cute how they're both trying to define their relationship up to this point. Looking forward to more of this, and I really hope Scootaloo won't be disappointed with her visit to the doctor. Rainbow Dash is doing an awesome job caring for her new little sister.
3897044 In the main room, yes, it would be illegal, however, her bedroom and the basement are not public areas and would not fall under that restriction.
3897255 How do we know she didn't? Rainbow hasn't looked through the bags yet. ;)
Besides - Twi can always make the socks for her! Rubber socks should be nothin' compared to a full-body costume!
On a semi-related note: I just imagined Pinkie at CoCoCon. More importantly, Pinkie in the rubber costumes. I just imagine her poor, beleaguered Mistress (or pet, for that matter!) standing there and facehoofing while Pinkie just wriggles around and giggles at the squeaky sounds.
Also, THANK YOU! So glad that I'm not the only guy out there who noticed that issue about Rarity and her line of "emergency" edible boots! Like Rarity's clientelle go out enough that they'd be lost in the wilderness and starving....
It's such a shame that there's not a lot of Jockification stuff out there (especially since it's something I'm really into ). Now I'm hoping a few elements of that might work their way into the story, although Dash is kinda a jock already, so not much of a transformation there.
Wow ok I just read this whole story up to here in one day And now I have a headache from using my eyes too much This whole fic was very cool and it was light on the clop I liked it very much Can't wait to see how they use what they bought. Rainbow Dash is so practical it is funny Also why didn't she buy the socks that would of been neat, and what of Rarity's edible boots. You know out of all their friends Rarity will probably be the first to figure out they are a couple next to Pinkie Pie I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
Twilight gulped. “It’s bad enough that I masturbated you with hypnosis, Rainbow Dash. The idea that I’d do it to actually make love, it just feels like rape.”
Good Twilight, rape is bad and it's awesome that you don't want to rape RD.
how did i never realise that![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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Wait, hush. *puts a hand to his ear* Do you hear that?
That's the sound of about a hundred clopfics burning, and a thousand being written to replace them![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Seriously, I use these little random ideas too much. If anyone ever wishes to expand on them, feel free to. CoCoCon alone can spawn a whole genre of fics, and 'Twilight gets arrested for having a love life' can make for a few funny stories, too.
Glad you like it, at any rate.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Aaawwww, nooooooooo~![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
I wanted to see Rainbow in her desired socks! Why didn't Twilight brought them in secret to surprise RD, whääääähy?
Anyway, i think the kissing scene needs some do-over. A bit longer, a bit more on the feel side on Twi given that this was her first loving kiss, due the short and quick kiss it felt quite lackluster. Though the kiss itself can be short but the way to the kiss, and Twi's feels before and when it happens, could be a bit more descripted. Or maybe add some Rainbow in finding feeling uneasy about kissing while she is her "mistress" very cute or something.
What do mean her species changed twice? From unicorn to alicorn is only once, isn't it?![:applejackconfused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackconfused.png)
"it" is unidentified.
*paramour
I rather enjoyed the scene at the end in the train. It was a welcome and refreshing return to what passes for normalcy between Twilight and Dash in this story, and I felt the connection between them pretty well.
The entire arc of the con did a good job of being on the abnormal side, especially towards the beginning. I definitely got a sense of the pair acclimating to the weirdness as it progressed.
Ooh, Magic cards.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
I mean... aw, that was sweet.
It's the little touches that make it especially nice, like Twilight referencing a book in mid-kiss. And I never considered how the rapid-fire morphological changes might have some lasting effects on her self-image. Very interesting, that.
I especially like the symmetry of changelings doing food service at an erotic paraphernalia convention. They give food, they get food. After all, with all those couples, there's got to be enough ambient love in the air.
And I have to wonder, just who is maybe-Trixie's partner?
Eagerly looking forward to more.
I think Twilight's characterization in this chapter was spot on. Rainbow's too. I'm glad Rainbow sseems to be getting over Twilight's earlier betrayal and all. I'm also glad Twilight didn't get arrested for being a Twilight impersonator.
3897255![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
Aaawwww, nooooooooo~
I wanted to see Rainbow in her desired socks! Why didn't Twilight brought them in secret to surprise RD, whääääähy?![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
Who says she didn't, I'm sure there was a part saying that Rainbow didn't really know what was in Twilight's bags.
3897000 3897044 This is certainly true but Twilight is a Princess now, so she effectively owns public buildings, I think she could get away with it.
As if getting new Magic cards was a letdown. :)
Last time I got packs, I got a Karador Ghost Chieftain. Happy days.
Oh, and the chapter was great as well.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
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Yeah I don't get it. Maybe referring to Equestria Girls?
OH god that last bit killed me!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
This story keeps getting better and better.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I'm not too sure about the last bit myself to be honest. I mean hilarious thought to say the least that's for sure
, but I'd at least consider the upper floor as personal space for Twilight, it is her bedroom afterall. Then again...hm...I'm gonna be mulling over that thought for days now. ![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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My guess is Unicorn to Alicorn, then Alicorn to Human in Equestria Girls. I guess her pretending to be an Earth/Pegasus pony during the convention (using her hooves, not magic) could be considered a species change, even though there was no real change to her body, rubber aside.
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I might get back to it later, but the truth is it's still only an experimental kiss.
And yes, I am referring from unicorn to alicorn to human back to alicorn as two species shifts. Technically it's three, but the main distinction is growing and losing a pair of limbs, so I'm not counting the reverse as a species change.
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I did actually look up the term, and I do mean 'paragon' as outstanding example. Paramour, meaning lover, would imply Rarity thinks Rainbow Dash is already seeing someone, rather than admiring a stallion she hasn't spoken to yet. I'm not sure how correct it is, but I have seen it used in that context, so I'm sticking to that. Did define the dish, though.
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That's besides the point. The point is that Celestia put Twilight in a library for most of her adult life. You have to wonder if Celestia just assumed Twilight would never think to question the rules or just, you know, go out and breed. Like Celestia thought the matter would never 'come up' (pun intended). Now that Twilight is a princess, I'm sure it is fine, perks of the title and all, but Celestia still has to answer for everything before that.
Seriously, someone write a fic about that. And who was the librarian before Twilight, anyway?
Awesome story and it's cute how they're both trying to define their relationship up to this point. Looking forward to more of this, and I really hope Scootaloo won't be disappointed with her visit to the doctor. Rainbow Dash is doing an awesome job caring for her new little sister.
aww , was hopping something interesting would be happening with the changlines , not just 'oh hey they're here too'....
two specie changes? When did she change the first time and to what? I only remember her going from Unicorn to Alicorn
3897044 In the main room, yes, it would be illegal, however, her bedroom and the basement are not public areas and would not fall under that restriction.
I'm torn between saying "nice worldbuilding" and "MOOOOORE SEX", so I'll split the difference and just say, "Nice sex."
Well, that didn't work out.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
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I think you might want to use a phrase more frequently seen in that context, such as "object of affection" or "intended beloved".
Paragon just feels wrong there because it's not a statement about others adoring you so much as someone being a shining example of their kind.
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How do we know she didn't? Rainbow hasn't looked through the bags yet. ;)
Besides - Twi can always make the socks for her! Rubber socks should be nothin' compared to a full-body costume!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
On a semi-related note: I just imagined Pinkie at CoCoCon. More importantly, Pinkie in the rubber costumes. I just imagine her poor, beleaguered Mistress (or pet, for that matter!) standing there and facehoofing while Pinkie just wriggles around and giggles at the squeaky sounds.
Also, THANK YOU! So glad that I'm not the only guy out there who noticed that issue about Rarity and her line of "emergency" edible boots! Like Rarity's clientelle go out enough that they'd be lost in the wilderness and starving....
It's such a shame that there's not a lot of Jockification stuff out there (especially since it's something I'm really into
). Now I'm hoping a few elements of that might work their way into the story, although Dash is kinda a jock already, so not much of a transformation there.
Wow ok I just read this whole story up to here in one day
And now I have a headache from using my eyes too much
This whole fic was very cool and it was light on the clop I liked it very much
Can't wait to see how they use what they bought.
Rainbow Dash is so practical it is funny
Also why didn't she buy the socks that would of been neat, and what of Rarity's edible boots.
You know out of all their friends Rarity will probably be the first to figure out they are a couple next to Pinkie Pie
I WANT MOAR SOON!
If that is alright with you ![:fluttershyouch:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershyouch.png)
I can only think of one time Twilight changed species. What was the other one?
edit: never mind, read the hint-explanation in the next chapter.
Dat ending.... that was just prue gold^^
Good Twilight, rape is bad and it's awesome that you don't want to rape RD.
So ... on departure, I realized:
Outside of the "changing rooms", you will see an alicorn. In the crowd, going up to the entrance. (or in this case, leaving.)
There is no way that won't make all the social media here. Hornbook, Chirper, WeTube, it'll be all over the place.
And Dash's color scheme ... it stands out so much that yeah, they'll be the talk of all the pony villains real soon now.