I should probably mention that I'll be taking the advice to avoid FimFiction altogether for a while, since I can't seem to avoid spoilers otherwise. Besides that, this site is basically enabling the sort of behaviour I use to justify not joining Facebook or Twitter. I can't afford to keep spending time here, so I'll try to keep it to only going online here when I have a new update. I'm also kind of cheating, I think, because I'm doing this without having finished the next chapter on my pile. Still, that means I have three chapters ready and waiting to be uploaded, it's no biggie.
Anyway, I might be slow to respond to comments from here on out. Just need to get work done. Hope you enjoy!
I know I've been a bit critical of this story before, but now it's starting to get good. Now that Twilight is wanting to be a good dom and treat Rainbow right. Maybe she should get a book or two at this convention, or attend seminars about dom/sub relationships. But now you say you'll be avoiding this site for a while, does that mean this won't be updating anytime soon?
3816480 Two things: 1) you're right on the mark about Twilight. While it may not be spelled out too clearly, Twilight is getting to grips with being a natural dominant, but Rainbow Dash is in it for the ability to be something different. Rainbow Dash is not a sub the way Twilight is a dom, that'd be too obvious. The difference between the two options would come into play if they ever break up: Twilight would need to find somepony she can dominate from time to time, while Rainbow Dash would be fine with someone who just looks past the surface. And yes, there is a bit of skill and care involved in domming. Whether Twilight will get that, is for future chapters. Hint: if you think this was borderline perverted, wait 'till next chapter. It's hilarious, unsettling, and plausible.
Which brings me to point 2. The reason I'm saying I'll be avoiding this site (or trying to) is because I'm getting too distracted. I spend way too much time refreshing my page to check for messages, to the point that I might as well be on Facebook or Twitter. I have not joined either precisely because they're too big a timesink. It's part of the reason I'm (again) avoiding S4, because it puts my mind on things I don't want it to be. I'm nowhere near as productive as I want to be, and I have only myself to blame for that. That goes both for college and fics.
That said, I started posting this story with the intent of updating weekly. Of all my stories so far, this is the one that's had the most input from people who wanted this story, especially the Mind Control group. I don't intend on disappointing. I have several chapters ready for final editing, meaning I can go for at least three more weeks before it becomes an issue.
This is not changing. Next chapter will still be up next week, and if I do need more time to write the next chapter, even then you won't know until I've run out of reserves, which with this schedule would be three weeks.
So don't worry. More is coming, and if I can get into a good rhythm, lots more is coming besides this story, too. Might even be tempted to do a separate Quorum Sensing sequel, but I need to set up a schedule, really, it's getting ridiculous how much ideas I have lying around all taunting and unfinished.
Congrats with the rubber alicorns word and it being the first in your story! I bet when it comes down to it your story shall be the first to be pulled when searched on Google and let's not forget the fan pictures to go with them.
So far I am liking this story, very naughty and hot if I do say so myself please keep up the great work.
Please have a bunch of ponies cosplay as Equestria's newest princess. I want to see their face when they come across the Princess Rubberlight Sparkle section.
3816534 I see, I must admit the idea of total domination still troubles me, but as long as Twilight is going to learn to do it right then it'll be okay. I know what you mean about this site, it sure can be a huge timesink.
This story continues to amaze me and my mind is still trapped in the constant ongoing process of being blown by your previous bit of lore about Pegasus breeds. I like the subtle references to Rainbow Dash's long tail, and at the risk of sounding efeminate, her tail really is gorgeous. Lots of nice descriptions of body language and a good, constant feed of mutual attraction between the two now sort of serious lovers.
I love the constant change in direction with crisis after crisis popping up and then being resolved, only to play into more strange fun as the story tumbles down the rabbit hole. Now they're at a sex con and rubber Alicorns, rubber Alicorns everywhere...
This chapter is a genius setup and I can't wait to see the things you promised or hinted at in the author's note and top comment. I simply cannot wait for more of this!
Rarity held a hoof to her chin. “Right, then, that narrows it down. Something is going to happen with Twilight that happened with the fake Cadence at the wedding, yet didn’t happen before. So it either means Twilight has found somepony to marry, Twilight is hypnotising somepony, or there’s a changeling invasion coming.” Applejack pondered it for a moment. “I’ll go stock up on bug spray.”
3816657 Oddly, I just checked and it doesn't show up on Google at all, leading me to think it's filtered out. If that's the case, then I'm not the first person to do this, the search just doesn't turn up any results. Anyway, back to work.
Huh. Well, that makes sense. If you want total anonymity in a society of three distinct subspecies (and domspecies,) you can't have any distinguishing marks. Something everyone has isn't distinguishing.
Also, Chekov's Hypnotic Suggestion. Wonder what Twilight slipped in on the ride over...
Rarity held a hoof to her chin. “Right, then, that narrows it down. Something is going to happen with Twilight that happened with the fake Cadence at the wedding, yet didn’t happen before. So it either means Twilight has found somepony to marry, Twilight is hypnotising somepony, or there’s a changeling invasion coming.”
Applejack pondered it for a moment. “I’ll go stock up on bug spray.”
I love the logical conclusions about Twilight. It's a shame to say, but
oh ok , for a second there i thought the build up your were making in this chapter was going ot be the rest of the main 6 crashing twi's and rainbow's fun upon finding them in their disguise and thinking they were changlings invading equestria again......
Rarity held a hoof to her chin. “Right, then, that narrows it down. Something is going to happen with Twilight that happened with the fake Cadence at the wedding, yet didn’t happen before. So it either means Twilight has found somepony to marry, Twilight is hypnotising somepony, or there’s a changeling invasion coming.” Applejack pondered it for a moment. “I’ll go stock up on bug spray.”
OH MY GOD IM DYING SHE JUST COMPLETELY DISREGARDS TWILIGHT FINDING LOVE
Rarity held a hoof to her chin. “Right, then, that narrows it down. Something is going to happen with Twilight that happened with the fake Cadence at the wedding, yet didn’t happen before. So it either means Twilight has found somepony to marry, Twilight is hypnotising somepony, or there’s a changeling invasion coming.”
Why not ALL OF THEM Chrysalis can help Twilight with being a dominatrix, and then marry her and Dash.
I should probably mention that I'll be taking the advice to avoid FimFiction altogether for a while, since I can't seem to avoid spoilers otherwise. Besides that, this site is basically enabling the sort of behaviour I use to justify not joining Facebook or Twitter. I can't afford to keep spending time here, so I'll try to keep it to only going online here when I have a new update. I'm also kind of cheating, I think, because I'm doing this without having finished the next chapter on my pile. Still, that means I have three chapters ready and waiting to be uploaded, it's no biggie.
Anyway, I might be slow to respond to comments from here on out. Just need to get work done. Hope you enjoy!
RUN DASHIE! THE RUBBER ALICORNS ARE EVERYWHERE!
*dieing of laughter from that* i must need some sleep, i'm laughing way more than i should be.
I know I've been a bit critical of this story before, but now it's starting to get good. Now that Twilight is wanting to be a good dom and treat Rainbow right. Maybe she should get a book or two at this convention, or attend seminars about dom/sub relationships. But now you say you'll be avoiding this site for a while, does that mean this won't be updating anytime soon?![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
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Two things:
1) you're right on the mark about Twilight. While it may not be spelled out too clearly, Twilight is getting to grips with being a natural dominant, but Rainbow Dash is in it for the ability to be something different. Rainbow Dash is not a sub the way Twilight is a dom, that'd be too obvious. The difference between the two options would come into play if they ever break up: Twilight would need to find somepony she can dominate from time to time, while Rainbow Dash would be fine with someone who just looks past the surface. And yes, there is a bit of skill and care involved in domming. Whether Twilight will get that, is for future chapters. Hint: if you think this was borderline perverted, wait 'till next chapter. It's hilarious, unsettling, and plausible.
Which brings me to point 2. The reason I'm saying I'll be avoiding this site (or trying to) is because I'm getting too distracted. I spend way too much time refreshing my page to check for messages, to the point that I might as well be on Facebook or Twitter. I have not joined either precisely because they're too big a timesink. It's part of the reason I'm (again) avoiding S4, because it puts my mind on things I don't want it to be. I'm nowhere near as productive as I want to be, and I have only myself to blame for that. That goes both for college and fics.
That said, I started posting this story with the intent of updating weekly. Of all my stories so far, this is the one that's had the most input from people who wanted this story, especially the Mind Control group. I don't intend on disappointing. I have several chapters ready for final editing, meaning I can go for at least three more weeks before it becomes an issue.
This is not changing. Next chapter will still be up next week, and if I do need more time to write the next chapter, even then you won't know until I've run out of reserves, which with this schedule would be three weeks.
So don't worry. More is coming, and if I can get into a good rhythm, lots more is coming besides this story, too. Might even be tempted to do a separate Quorum Sensing sequel, but I need to set up a schedule, really, it's getting ridiculous how much ideas I have lying around all taunting and unfinished.
I can't wait for more!
With Raritys questioning (in combination with the pinkie sense). Is she starting to figure things out between dash and twi?![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Congrats with the rubber alicorns word and it being the first in your story! I bet when it comes down to it your story shall be the first to be pulled when searched on Google and let's not forget the fan pictures to go with them.
So far I am liking this story, very naughty and hot if I do say so myself please keep up the great work.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Please have a bunch of ponies cosplay as Equestria's newest princess. I want to see their face when they come across the Princess Rubberlight Sparkle section.
3816534 I see, I must admit the idea of total domination still troubles me, but as long as Twilight is going to learn to do it right then it'll be okay. I know what you mean about this site, it sure can be a huge timesink.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
This story continues to amaze me and my mind is still trapped in the constant ongoing process of being blown by your previous bit of lore about Pegasus breeds. I like the subtle references to Rainbow Dash's long tail, and at the risk of sounding efeminate, her tail really is gorgeous. Lots of nice descriptions of body language and a good, constant feed of mutual attraction between the two now sort of serious lovers.
I love the constant change in direction with crisis after crisis popping up and then being resolved, only to play into more strange fun as the story tumbles down the rabbit hole. Now they're at a sex con and rubber Alicorns, rubber Alicorns everywhere...![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
This chapter is a genius setup and I can't wait to see the things you promised or hinted at in the author's note and top comment. I simply cannot wait for more of this!
Dear Applejack and Rarity:
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Oddly, I just checked and it doesn't show up on Google at all, leading me to think it's filtered out. If that's the case, then I'm not the first person to do this, the search just doesn't turn up any results. Anyway, back to work.
Huh. Well, that makes sense. If you want total anonymity in a society of three distinct subspecies (and domspecies,) you can't have any distinguishing marks. Something everyone has isn't distinguishing.
Also, Chekov's Hypnotic Suggestion. Wonder what Twilight slipped in on the ride over...
What has been unleashed cannot be undone. You're like Pandora, except the box was full of sex toys.
This story is amazing on so many different levels, and it just got even better.
You sir, are a champion of fanfic writers.
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Is it bad that that comment suddenly made me think of Big Brother?
I don't watch it myself, though I here about it from my sister and mother.
mind blown.
3816384 Explain the joke please?
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There are a LOT of alicorn OCs with red and black coloring somewhere along the body.
As an example,2.bp.blogspot.com/-GLTd6y6_Vb8/UIKpag5gvRI/AAAAAAAA9cg/iaX169QW_tE/s400/1.png
Equestria is full of perverts, it seems. XD
oh ok , for a second there i thought the build up your were making in this chapter was going ot be the rest of the main 6 crashing twi's and rainbow's fun upon finding them in their disguise and thinking they were changlings invading equestria again......
DAT MEME! IT IS REAL!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
I think I might be part machine or something. My laugh at the last part sounded like an unoiled machine.
The first, and closest, things I think of. Don't question my love of ducks.
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OH MY GOD IM DYING![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
SHE JUST COMPLETELY DISREGARDS TWILIGHT FINDING LOVE
Why not ALL OF THEM
Chrysalis can help Twilight with being a dominatrix, and then marry her and Dash.