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Wow, great Story - But what the Buck had happened
? Anway, cant wait for more 
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thanks! you know... i really hate it when people down vote things and don't tell why... makes it very hard to fix if there is a problem...
I believe that she was experimented on and had parts of her wings taken
Away ...for testing ...maybe human.. I think she teliported here and
The FBI found her
And then hat the FBI Thea her away thinking she was dead
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ha ha! i laughed... anyway although that is a good idea of sorts, i have a slightly(very) different plan for this
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? (Sorry for my bad english 
)
Huh, but I hasn't downvoted
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i was not referring to you... i was talking about people in general... and your English is pardoned :3
chapter two is ready to roll... as soon as my editor stops being slow anyway....
Not bad...
Geez you sure are mean to Dash I love it is she gonna get out anytime soon?
2192276 i know i am... don't worry... this whole thing isn't me beating on Dash though...
Nice chapter can't wait to see her freinds reaction
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thanks! it is nice to hear some feed back once and a while
for those who have no noticed i have this problem with my head witch will not allow a chapter to be shorter than the last one... as i am nowhere close to done yet expect to start seeing 2-3 thousand word chapters soon
2233901 2,000-3,000 word chapters are 20% cooler my sadistic mind loves the dash hurt. by the way why were you calling her "It" after that relized she was a pony?
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she's pretty messed up... they aren't sure and didn't think to check
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heh... thanks. i am carrying on as we speak... work has been slow recently because i have been pretty over loaded at school. to be honest i was pretty sure people were done with this story, now that i see otherwise i will be sure to get something out
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thank you reading that made my day 
i have a follower! :D now my day has been made... i am three hundred words short on my toltal now and will probably be putting out a chapter later today (provided my editor decides to work today
)
You sure do know how to make cliffhanger. I did not see that coming beaten and raped how could it possibly get any worse for dash. I want more ASAP.
2361214 heh thanks! i can't wait for summer to come around... although now that i have a 1000 word chapter they are going to just keep getting bigger
Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
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whew... now there is a question i thought nobody would ask me.... i almost feel successful now... hmmm.... its hard to say... if i had someone to do my math homework for me i could probably get it out by wednesday... (witch probably means friday) if not maybe the weekend...
can't wait to keep reading when i get home thanks for showing me!
Souffle
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11 :P little late for the homework now. anyways i am attempting to get another chapter done this weekend. glad you like it!
sorry for the delay everyone! next chapter is at the editors! waiting to see it back. today i promise :F
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FINALLY! my editor just sent it back to me... going up now...
At this point it may be better if they let her go with all she as been through especially since Mrs. Creepy is back and where the heck are her friends they should be by her side. MORE!
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good to hear! will get more done soon.
Your editor needs to be kicked! The spelling and grammar errors are distracting me from an otherwise very good story. Consider having someone give your work a thorough proofreading. I would be willing to give it a go, your chapters are so short, it would take me only 30 minutes or so.
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hehehehe... i can't wait to show that to him... my chapters are getting longer though... as each is longer than the last
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I wasn't trying to make you feel bad, it is just very hard to read a story that has a large amount of errors. The story its self is actually quite good and I look forward to more.
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i don't feel bad :F and jsyk my editor is on an Ipod... so yeah...
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if you feel like doing me the favor you can edit these and i'll re-upload them
What the...
I'm confused... But I want more
!
2734605 :D comments! just when i was ready to give up... it is your feed back... anything at all from hello to error correction that keeps me going...
2734605 actually... tell me about your confusion... i may be able to shed light...
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Well, everything about that mysterious guy, why rainbow is injured, why she has a child, and so on
Please continue.
2750088 :P it will be explained in due time.(probably after i think of a good name for him :P )
2799585 i am very glad to hear that. :3 more to come soon
Nice Chapter ^^ And way better than the last (With the writing-style and such)! Moar
!
2800591 till then!
2800912 oh? where do you see improvement? i would love to hear how to improve more
3044555 almost have something done... just hang on...
Awesome! But... After each chapter, you leave me more and more confused
3076590 perhaps i can clarify... what about?