great... that is what my effort is worth... two more down votes... *sigh* really wish people would tell me how to improve rather then just smash my work... and it is someone who has been watching this story a while too because unique view count is still in the same place....
3076660 i am getting there. have you ever seen a book that told you everything on the first page? the other problem is i can only convey things through Rainbow and at the moment all she can do is remember and move her hoof a bit.
3078516 well I am wondering if the doctor really is a good guy, what if he is another one of the ones that did those things to RD and is just playing the part to knock her down again later
Sorry for the lack of updates... I had to send my laptop in for repairs and best buy has some of the shittyist customer service I have ever seen... never going back to THAT location...
Awesome! But... After each chapter, you leave me more and more confused
3076590 perhaps i can clarify... what about?
great... that is what my effort is worth... two more down votes... *sigh* really wish people would tell me how to improve rather then just smash my work... and it is someone who has been watching this story a while too because unique view count is still in the same place....
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Well, everything - What happened to Rainbow, what has it to do with her friends, why do this happened, and so on
3076660 i am getting there. have you ever seen a book that told you everything on the first page? the other problem is i can only convey things through Rainbow and at the moment all she can do is remember and move her hoof a bit.
why do I have the feeling this is just another sick and twisted game
3078489 heh.. define 'what'? feel free to ask questions everyone. the more specific the more likely they will be answered.
3078516 well I am wondering if the doctor really is a good guy, what if he is another one of the ones that did those things to RD and is just playing the part to knock her down again later
3081058 well it is possible... but he has done a lot of work to keep her safe. he may just be a good actor
3081144 that is actually what I am afraid of, this story sort of makes me think of the maximum ride series to be honest
3082227 i am done physically harming her for the most part at this point so you needent worry too much about her...
3083121 yea there really isn't that much more you can do to "physically" harm her
Sorry for the lack of updates... I had to send my laptop in for repairs and best buy has some of the shittyist customer service I have ever seen... never going back to THAT location...