At this point it may be better if they let her go with all she as been through especially since Mrs. Creepy is back and where the heck are her friends they should be by her side. MORE!
Your editor needs to be kicked! The spelling and grammar errors are distracting me from an otherwise very good story. Consider having someone give your work a thorough proofreading. I would be willing to give it a go, your chapters are so short, it would take me only 30 minutes or so.
2447752 I wasn't trying to make you feel bad, it is just very hard to read a story that has a large amount of errors. The story its self is actually quite good and I look forward to more.
At this point it may be better if they let her go with all she as been through especially since Mrs. Creepy is back and where the heck are her friends they should be by her side. MORE!
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good to hear! will get more done soon.
more more! MORE!
Your editor needs to be kicked! The spelling and grammar errors are distracting me from an otherwise very good story. Consider having someone give your work a thorough proofreading. I would be willing to give it a go, your chapters are so short, it would take me only 30 minutes or so.
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hehehehe... i can't wait to show that to him... my chapters are getting longer though... as each is longer than the last
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I wasn't trying to make you feel bad, it is just very hard to read a story that has a large amount of errors. The story its self is actually quite good and I look forward to more.
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i don't feel bad :F and jsyk my editor is on an Ipod... so yeah...
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if you feel like doing me the favor you can edit these and i'll re-upload them
I'm confused... But I want more !
2734605 :D comments! just when i was ready to give up... it is your feed back... anything at all from hello to error correction that keeps me going...
2734605 actually... tell me about your confusion... i may be able to shed light...
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Well, everything about that mysterious guy, why rainbow is injured, why she has a child, and so on ...
Please continue.
2750088 :P it will be explained in due time.(probably after i think of a good name for him :P )