"To further reach our noble goals, I hereby give you, and your squad, permission to proceed with operation 'Sky clearing'.
Rainbow Dash, AKA the element of loyalty, MUST die! Failure is not an option!
Good luck, and may Celestia watch over us all!
//Mastermind."
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986786 Yo dawg, I heard you liked first comments, so I put a first comment in my first comment so you can read my first comment while reading my first comment!
Okay, enough with the silliness, now for some serious comments:
This is an attempt to end a long writersblock I have had. I didn't send this to a proof-reader, but if people want me to continue this, I will in the future.
My second attempt in doing a multipart-fic, since my first one ended up on "hiatus" :( But this time, I'm writing in a genre I'm more familiar with, plus I have a somewhat clear plot-structure this time than the last time.
Let's see if people want me to continue this or if it is just crap.
Tags will be added as the story progresses.
WARNING: I'm not too familiar where the teen/mature line goes, (those of you that have read my "I have no wings and I must fly" fic knows I should have put the "mature" tag on, instead the "teen"
), but I'm aming to keep the violence teen-rated, so give me a shoutout if I cross that line.
Hello there.
Interesting, i will track. Snygt jobbat, HAHA!
Yes! My mortal enemy will finally be eliminated! Thank you kindly!
997485 Hi
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Guard team Alpha, operation Double Rainbow is a go. Your mission is to protect Rainbow Dash at any cost. ANY cost. If you fail, the cost is the security of Equestria. DO. NOT. FAIL. If you die on this mission, your service will be remembered. Signed,
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That Trolestia emoticon is scaring me right now. If Rainbow really MUST die, make it painless, ok? Please? 
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 
will track
*sees title*
*thinks about how Rainbow Dash is shipped with everypony*
John Tucker Must Die, perhaps?
999391 you press the star next to the thumbs up/down slot (yea, I too miss when you could press "track" and "fav" individually, but right now, it's the only way)
1003760 Yes there was, but they mixed it with "fav" :/
When reading the description, the only thing I could think of was TheSwain's "Mastermind" series.
first
hold on
This is really good!