Jesus and Luna have two different problems. Jesus is tired of seeing his beloved subjects live in chaos and Luna is just as bored as she was before turning into Nightmare Moon. So when the next 'immortal-reunion' appears, Luna comes up with an idea that will fix both their problems: Why not send the elements of harmony to earth to teach the humans about friendship? It would deal with Jesus concern and Luna would have a great adventure to watch during her boring nights. Nothing can possible go wrong!
Unless Celestia finds out that the elements of harmony is missing...
Or if Satan gets mad that someponies tries to ruin the wonderful chaos he have so carefully created...
Or if God decides to start the end the world just some days after the main six arrives...
NOTE: THIS IS NOT A "HUMAN IN EQUESTRIA" FIC! Almost the opposite, don't you think ;)
Note: (This shouldn't be any problem, but just in case I write this) I have been very carefully not to accidently insult anyones personal faith, but if someone still feels offended, I am sorry, it was not my intention when I wrote this.
Edit: on hiatus cause of writers block. Story is not forgotten, just put on hold.
OH, and for everyones information: I made this fic out from pure boredom. And for my friends who haven't read my blog posts: this is NOT the story I have been woriking on, just so you know.
woohohooo this looks hilarious
Sounds interesting
And yay, another from sweden
OH god. This sounds like a bad idea on so many levels...
And yet, I know it's going to be hilarious.
EDIT: Read the story so far.
Yeah, this will be funny.
This...can't be good.
701105 I know it is a bit "risky" to write a fic involving religion, I hope that no one gets offended, I really do...
Sounds interesting, I'll track.
This sounds strange. But it is the first bible parody ponies on earth fanfiction I have seen so far. Ill give it a shot.
Jesus is a brony
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701142
I'm Christian and I'm laughing my ass off. I think you're good.
My god... This will be glorious.
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greetings from Sweden! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
EDIT: Pun oh so intended.
701197 Thank you :3 This will be a wild ride, I can promise you that...
(And for the record, I'm a christian as well)
In the legendary words of Shao Khan:
701212
Can't wait!
Risky thing....(better Jesus than Mahomet, it's easy to piss of some muslims.) Time to read!
this is going to be good.
Damn. This is going to be nice story indeed ^^ Imma watching this!
I was just talking to someone about a story like this on Wanderer D's page, and they called me a MAD MAN!
BUT IT'S REAL! I KNEW IT ALL ALONG! I'M NOT INSANE! I'M SANE IN AN INSANE WORLD!
The crossovers on this site never cease to amaze me. Mr. Bean, Rorshach, and now fucking Jesus?
They can't get any more wild that this, it's not possible...
EDIT: Just read it there now. Despite a few spelling/grammar errors, hands down the best fanfic I've ever read. Absolute genius.
701653
Challenge accepted
As for the story itself, I really like the concept. This stands to be hilariously funny. I especially like the little biblical references you throw in there. Un-detection spell on Eve in the Garden? seems legit
The only thing I noticed: you need an editor. You've got a very interesting story here and a good editor to help you iron out the kinks could make it something truly fantastic.
alright... in some days when this story become popular, prepare for some butthurt religious comment
anyway, I don't really care about story which include religion/ religious stuff in it. But this one take my attention, I'm waiting for the next~
701653 701770 Ah grammar, my arch enemy from the beginning of times... If not anyone of you feels willing to help out, I will go and see if I can find someone else ^^
704083 SEND A PROPHET. lol. Okay, this is going to be interesting....Can you please make this history faster? fav and tracked! and...do you have skype?
704083
As much as I would love to help out, I'd rather not spoil the surprise.
Sorry
Oh wow...... this could either be brilliant or a train wreck, but it is full of potential. Im looking forward to future installments!
705368 I don't blame you
705153 When you say "make this history faster", do you mean making chapters faster or making the storyline procces faster? And if you want my Skype, send me a pm, and I give it to you :3
705509 chapters faster :D You know, 2 chapters a day or 1 will make your followers DOUBLE efficiently. I once had a history and I made this. I'm not doing this right now 'cuz my prereader and proofreader didn't enter on a LONG LONG time. And i'll make sure I pm you in a small time
705517 Haha, I am aiming to release 1-2 chapters per week (next one planning to hit on saturday/sunday, depending on if I find a proofreader or not). If I would just spit out words to release fast chapters, the already poor grammar will go straight down to a childs level (even this sentence lacks grammar). Quality before quantity, am I right?
Now we know what cause all the ponies in eath stories like My Little Dashie. great story and update soon.
thank you for writing this.
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i like your perception of jesus, a frustrated man who is polite,meek and tolerate but stressed over human stupidity. not angry but saddened very good!
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I can get behind this. More please.
Two things.
You spelled Owloscious wrong.
You spelled Ink wrong.
...Seems legit.
This is 120% Menoshe approved!
717858 a) Huh? I didn't spell Owloysius wrong according to mlp.wikia look for yourself! :D
b) haha, yea, I failed XD I will be right on it!
719519 Oh, my bad. I had seen somewhere where it was spelled like that.
719746 >:) We will see Bob again, that is all I want to reveal
Well, there are a few minor spelling errors. But regardless, I enjoyed this story immensely. Have a mustache.
Bob...gamer angel. This is how angels really must be
And about the story and fact that this is only one chapter... MOAR
I hope we will hear more from the sandwich.... The sandwich and Bob would make an excellent duo doin... Whatever Bob does.
721969 But sandwich is dead
721975 Well Jesus died once.... And he is in the story....
My opinion that was formed in the last chapter still stands that this is the single greatest fanfic ever written. Again, a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but not enough for it to become an issue.
You sir, are a bloody genius.
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723304 Thank you
I was a bit nervous that this chapter wouldn't hold quality... :P
this is amazing!!! pleeaaase update it soon
766025
I am afraid that next update will take a long time 
I'm sorry for this
766025 But I promise it WILL be written!
Eventually...
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Don't worry, I'll be waiting
LOL this is great! Keep up the great work!