A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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Sadly It Has A Broken Leg, SO We're Gunna Have To Put It Down.
Joking Of Course.
Great Story.
Aaaaaaw~ dash can pretend to be strong but she's still a mare after all :)
i cried a little, but they were manly tears! i swear!
Oh wow, this chapter is so fun! And exciting! I can't wait to see what happens next?! And did he manage to fill out the Cetzionship forums? And also what is going to happen with Scootaloo!? Oh gosh!!! So much Stress!!!
Anyway I can't wait to see whats next this is exciting!
The author tells me not to read the entire thing in one go.
HA! Whatever, whatever I do what I want!
So..many...feels. dude these chapters a prefect combo of interesting backstory and heart warming feels
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3934458 Brackium Emendo
A truley sweet chapter............it would be interesting to read more about Lunas lover, perhaps something you might consider for Another fic?
Best chapter ever
Great chapter and i'm glad that you're back
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I've been looking forward to this since last November, and I gotta say, it was worth the wait.
Obviously, like a lot of your fans, I'd love to hear about how scootaloos story would unfold, but I wasn't disappointed in the slightest, well done
Great chapter!
I actually forgot about the last update so I had two I got to read in a row.
Give us more when you can, I know I'll be waiting eagerly.
so this is an spin off of another fic? and if it is please post the link for it
I have to say this was the most developed chapter to date. And my favorite, don't worry about the word count it wasn't that long as I've read longer.
It was a great update and well worth the wait I'm excited for the next!
see, i read stuff like this, and it makes my pitiful stories look like shit, but no matter how much it makes my stuff look like a turd, I absolutely love reading stories like these. This is really a masterpiece, I can't find anything in this chapter I don't like. Truly good work man, run with this story for as long as you can. Please, I mean, if you don't mind...
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Thanks! And yeah, Scootaloo is definitely going to be touched on. And I guess I kind of left the citizenship thing up to assumption to the reader... he got his citizenship, but I never directly said so here.
3934458 Ouch. What makes it
betterworse is this is a comment on a story about horses.3934918 Such rebel. :P
3934946 Thanks! I was actually afraid that the whole backstory thing would turn out really boring and lengthy, but it seems to have gone over well.
3935187 I've considered it, and have an idea in mind should I choose to try it... It all depends on whether or not I'm too burnt out on writing once this fic is all done and through.
3935749 That... exists?
Why did I not know of this sooner
3937427 Sorry, no spin-off here. The reason it starts out in what seems like the middle of a story is because it was originally meant to be one-shot, that I just continued because everyone seemed to like it.
I mean, this whole thing literally started because I just needed to get a random scene out of my head. When I think about it, that's kind of... wow.
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Best chapter? Really? And here I was, desperately hoping it wouldn't turn out bland and boring. Thanks, by the way
3938000 I haven't read any of your work, but if I have any advice it's just to keep trying. Not many are just born good at something, in fact if you want, I can probably dredge up some of my first fanfics just to painfully embarrass myself and show you how crappy of a writer I used to be.
Also, for the most part, try not to worry whether people are going to like what you write or not. If you can't even bring yourself to take a chance and post something you think others won't like, you'll trap yourself in a little bubble of fear and despair. With an atmosphere of monoxide to kill you and your creativity. Not saying that this is your problem, but it was a major one that I had (and still kind of have.)
3938436 I didn't know about it before you posted that chapter
For some reason I had this song playing in my head while reading Luna's tale.
And this song with the later parts with Dash and Ivan.
Not sure why but the songs just seem to fit the different situations and tones of story.
Fuck I am bad at endings... Have a meme
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It should be You cock your head, confused.
Why the fuck would Rainbow get upset about Ivan wanting to see his fucking family once again?
That makes no fucking sense!
Sure, he'd be leaving her (maybe for a short while, who knows) but is it really that fucking unbelievable that he misses his old home!?
'Oi! Rainbow Dash, how would you like to be forcefully taken from Equestria and sent to fucking Mars? Oh, you wanna go home? You're a horrible pony for missing those you care about!'
Seriously, though. That pissed me off.
Otherwise, the chapter was okay. Sweet, sure.
Good job so far. That one thing about Rainbow is the only thing that's irked me about this story.
3938436 I see... I thought that was gonna somehow be played into the storyline somewhere along the lines later...
3939190 I dont think that she does not want him to see them again... I think its more along the lines of... She does not want him to leave her... And if he should return to Earth then there is a likely hood that he would never come back... She just fears being alone...
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I did think of that as well, but still that's very selfish of her.
3941572 Can you really blame her? I could not... I think I'd act simular to her if this had happened... I mean in the end she kinda give up everything to live with him in a way... But that could be something else....
Anyway I can't really blame her for the way she has acted.
Cant wait for this to be more regularly posted, great story man just keep truckin on! :)
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I'm not blaming her, you're right. I would act the same. But that doesn't make it any better or less selfish of her.
Almost...ALMOST fell asleep but nope, I pressed on like a Trooper for this story
FUCK YOU EYE-LIDS, I WIN!!
3942710 I guess you'er right...
3943424 lol
I'm just wondering, if Scoots isn't a main character, then why is she included in the tags?
3965066 Well, I... have my reasons.
3938680 Lol. This whole time, I didn't even see the difference between the 'your' and the 'you,' and kept wondering what you were talking about.
im so happy about this story about that ivan and dash can have foals thats super duper fantastic
such words, much chapter
so 'Fucking updated stories not showing this chapter get uploaded'
Wow
4023335 *cowers in the corner
wrestling season, man...
If it helps any, I'm nearly done with the next chapter.
Well.... this was a suprisingly fuzzy chapter^^
Although, this does lead me to think that celestia accidentely hurt Luna quite a bit without even know it... Luna, you have my everlasting respect for not breaking down again. *insert image of a pony saluting here*
It's kind of annoying that he has to choose. In HIE stories, I see this happen way too much. Sort of annoying to see the same trope over and over again. I kinda wish they could go back and forth, it would be interesting.
This is just such an awesome story.
So if anybody wants to listen to this FanFiction after Weird Alicorns Readings
I converted the text into speech and uploaded it here:
https://mega.nz/#F!QB9nCBhZ!PN-ltruatnTSDyT3QZg3nA
But be aware that this reading sounds like a robot