A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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Scootadoption! YAY`!
Um, you keep me from throwing in some really bad stuff on a regular basis, not to mention doing a fantastic job of concisely pointing out what's wrong and how to fix it. The thanks go to you on my part.
Awww!!
Need more scootalove.
Daaaw, that's sweet.
Very nice!
2981475 Idk, it just always seems like I don't get back to you very fast. At the fastest, it takes at least 24 hours. And really, you do the same for me.
2981994 Thanks so much Comments like these let me know that someone's really enjoying my work. In fact... I may go start next chapter's outline tonight
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Yeah, but I'm an unemployed jackass with nothing else to do, you have school and other reasons for delay. Also you manage that and still write more than me, so...
and here I thought it'd end with them adopting scootaloo.... guess not^^ Still it was a pretty touching chapter. I hope that asshole will get his share later...
I shit you not if this goes the Scootaloo adoption route then I'm out. It happens in every bloody Human x RD story ever. If it doesn't go that way, then huzzah! I still like this story!
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2984864 Alright Mr. Literal, I know that one doesn't, haha. But my basic point is the same, I'm rather sick of this happening and it would just put me off personally. If other people like it, then they can read it, but I won't be anymore.
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Alright, care to point out an example or two? I've yet to see that scenario myself.
2985130 Of course, Forgotten by salsav91, and Memoirs of a Reality Jumper by Techogre.
EDIT: I think my main gripe isn't that it's cliché in that she ends up adopted of she's an orphan or her parents hate her etc., it tends to be how stupidly it's done, if that makes sense. It tends to be, 'We like Scootaloo, she's always sad. Let's adopt her!' And it's all rather nice and silly, and how trivial it all is. That's why in my example of Memoirs of a Reality Jumper I don't have as much of a problem with it, because although it isn't brilliant and it's still something I aren't personally a fan of, it's done a lot better than most.
Also, I read a hell of a lot, and I joined over a year ago, so I've been exposed to quite a few plot devices and such, so that's likely to be why I've spotted it more than you. And I'm lazy and don't have a job, so reading and gaming are all I use to pass time...
"The Healing Power of Hankey Pankey."
- Ivan 2013
2985156 Truthfully, I have two story lines planned, so it can go either way. I still haven't made up my mind yet. However, if I do decide to go with Scootadoption, I'm sorry to see you go.
Really, I would think that it's about the enjoyability of the story itself, but I see your point about something extremely cliche ruining a story, therefore rendering it unenjoyable. Even though I've never actually seen this particular instance myself.
Even though I agree with your argument, I also have to say that I can't and absolutely won't let your comments persuade or change the story in any way. Sound fair?
2985588 It sounds entirely fair, because after all, it was just that - a comment. I'm not an expert or one of your pre-readers or anything of the sort, so it's understandable and respectable that you'll stick to your guns.
Also, I just read my original comment on the topic and noticed it sounds a lot more rude and negative than when I thought about it, so I'm sorry about that. Might be because I got back from holiday early hours of the morning and have had essentially no sleep...
Anyway, I'm sure you're aware which story line I want you to take, but I'm aware that I'm essentially a drop in the ocean here, and that lots of people are fans of the Scootadoption device. Despite my original comment, I am quite lenient; if you go the Scootadoption route and it is done well, doesn't become extremely sappy and sickly sweet, and isn't the sole focus of the story, then I will be happy to stay. Like I said, I do like this story, I don't want to leave but there are some things that unless done right/to my liking, I find unbearable. I'm picky like that...
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Yeah that first comment was dickish, thus my reaction. But I too an unemployed and read fucktons, but there us about 500 fucktons of stuff to read that doesn't even mention scoot's parental situation.
Blame my phone for "us", should be is.
2986115 Yeah, sorry about that. I pretty much only read HiE so that may be why I tend to stumble on it so frequently.
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Me too, but I guess I find it less because I'm a twi fan...
2994412 look at my comment below,
2995389 So, iPad has a code cracker or something? I took letters from random languages for my special little writing.
Whatever the case, I'll try to throw in some more Equish into the next chapter. Let's see if you can do it.
That's a challenge.
2997382 random languages and -/:;()$&@"'!?,.[]{}#%^*+=¥£€><~|\_.,?!',
everyone knows where this is going .___.
"Home ain't where the heart is. It's where people respect who you are." -Leonard Far Cry 3
I personally don't like the whole Scootaloo adoption thing, but it probably won't make me stop reading either way. What I really don't like in these human x dash stories is when a herd gets started and Rainbow is just like whatever with it. That just ruins the intimacy for me.
3001732 Same
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I considered doing that. But, it's like you said, a herd would definitely ruin some aspects of the story.
2999115 Do they? Heh heh.
3002695 one does not simply resist the urge to adopt scootaloo
3002933 Very true.
3000165 You like to see hobo's naked? - Joe dirt
so good
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Just know that I absolutely cringe whenever I remember that I wrote that.
That will be all.