A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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yay!
Welp that was fast...
But wasn't unwarranted either and I suspect it will be sometime before they truly 'connect' again.
Thanks for the update!
~8chill
huzzah for speed adoptions!
Really? From hating to adoption in less than 2000 words and you had it almost entirely happen off screen? Wow. Just wow. You've given absolutely no reason for Scootaloo to listen to Dash in the preceding chapters, or for her to accept the apology and subsequent offer, no actual indication that she'd forgiven them in any way, and yet we're supposed to believe her emotional 180 degree-flip at the end? Sorry, but no. Not buying it.
Eh, kind of rushed it, man. Children are stubbornly loyal to their parents. Unless you happen to write a chapter looking into Scootaloo's mind over the past month since the incident, you can make it have some reality to her decision.
Maybe she tried to visit her dad and he told her to f off.
Maybe she actually applied some of her developing thinking into what happened.
Maybe a pony sat down with her and told her (at a child's level) what happened.
Maybe she got a visit from her sister and they talked about it.
Maybe the M6 took turns pulling her aside and asking her what she feels.
It feels right as to where Scoots winds up (like anybody expected something different), but writing a serious conflict can require some planning. This just feels too rushed, especially considering serious injuries were involved. Don't even get me started on the psychological damage...
I hope you do that.
Daaaaaawh Scoots is awesome
Hey this time shit didn't go wrong that's a first
Adopt scoots? CALLED IT!!
You know, I feel like I just recreated Magical Mystery Cure.
About the arc 4 end. There are people who like it for what it is, people that say it was rushed but still good (and maybe if this wasn't my best work, it can easily be redeemed), and then people that hate it and think I executed it poorly.
Hopefully, this doesn't lead into a division where half the readers hate all the following chapters, and half of them enjoy it and will defend it for all it's worth.
Because we Hasbro now.
And scoots is finally adopted took long enough :P
well, there's our Acootadobtion^^
Now, onward to the fifth arc!
I remember having an argument about how I don't like Scootadoption in the comments of this story before, so I won't go into all that again. What I will say is what some others are saying, which is that I do think it is rushed. I know you posted a blog about struggling to write for this story and kind of losing interest (?) in it not too long ago, so I don't know if that has anything to do with it, but if it does I think it will be better for everyone if you just take the time you need to write rather than powering through them. You surprised me, which is good I suppose, thought the whole adoption thing had been scrapped, haha. Anyway, best of luck with it, I'll see how it develops from here before I go on a Scootadoption rant.
Grate chapter
omg omg i luv this series
Really... -__- sneaky, can you not just give us a bigger middle finger than to stop writing, d*** move bro, D*** move
4390486 Sure. I can write a forced, shitty storyline and muck up the story. It's better to leave it as it is rather than ruin what it was.
Besides, I'm leaving it on hiatus in case I do want to come back to it. In case I want to voluntarily devote a good portion of my free time to writing fanfiction.
Sup,
Ehhh. Well this is disappointing, cause I thought you might be heading in a new direction with the possible split up, solving the scootaloo crisis, and now foals possibly in the equation. Now I see that I was expecting too much because of the lack of effort put into the end of the fourth arc after such an amazing chapter. I hope you can sort out your issues and continue this story because the end of the fourth arc needs to be fixed and I think there is still a lot of potential for a 5th arc. I still have hope for this story, and if you write another chapter, I will read it readily.
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Why, thank you good sir!
New chapter SOON™