A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
But otherwise, good chapter
I should probably say something positive like yay an update or d'aw the feels, unfortunately for your feelings all I can come up with is,
they are finally back from the beach.
Wow that ending was something very interesting! If his brothers' alive I can smell a spinoff in the making most curious!
2650402 I feel the same way. That arc went on waaaay too long; time to move onto more important things.
2650523 Considering I'm estimating this story to be at least thirty chapters long, I don't know about spin-off, since I'll probably want to move on to other things by then. But, keep watching this story, things will surprise you.
2650380 That paragraph, even that sentence alone holds so many hints to later events.
2650618
I know right
I think you wrote this whole chapter just to say
"For now, bury the hatchet".
/)*(\
2650640Calm down, it was just a joke.
2651108 What? I was just giving you a hint. I'm never sure if anyone ever notices the hints in these chapters.
2652068 I guess I misunderstood the comment. Sorry, man.
okay wtf? Am I the only one who doesnt get the "you bury the hatchet" joke/refference? Can somebody please explain it to me?
I did, however, get something else
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2656439 'Burying the hatchet' was an expression coined from when certain Native American tribes would bury a hatchet as a sign of peace. In this case, it was supposed to mean that Ivan has made inner peace with himself. I guess since he literally buried a hatchet, it sounded funny to a lot of people, which I suppose it does, but it was originally meant to be a serious part.
And I'm glad someone besides my proofreader pointed that out XD
2657462 I see. I figured it would be that since I remembered that pretty much a second after posting that comment^^ Thanks for explaining though
as for the other refference: You're very welcome^^ lol
Lovely chapter. :) More development on our protagonist as well as seeing that Rainbow has grown since we first saw her, willing to forgive and accept Ivan's anger. I especially love that Rainbow asks if Ivan will be okay, it's just something she hasn't really done in the past.
Also listened to this while reading:
Link
2671451 I wish I knew about this music link earlier. I was listening to hardstyle, lol . It was not until things started getting serious did I realize my mistake!
2678643
Yeah, that wouldn't really be the best for such a poignant chapter like this one. ^^ I do love listening to music when reading, and it's great to share my selections from time to time.
I listened to "Gift of Mortality" initially because it did play at the end of the film it was in, and of course this is the end of the arc. It was only more perfect that the chapter itself, much like the song, has a feeling of new beginnings and growth, yet still a bittersweet feeling to it. Ivan makes peace with the hatchet, a symbol of his past life, and begins to start a new chapter of his life with Rainbow.
have a fav
2679369 You have no idea how glad I am that someone got the symbolism of that!!
Again, your perception, my good sir.
2681077 *takes* Thank you, sir.
You know what I'd like to see in this story?
Ivan+Dash+Romantic Cruise
do it.
Please?
2715967 Hm, I actually considered that once... It makes me think: what could possibly go wrong on a cruise?
Oh, and I think I'm done with my break. Next chapter should be out soon.
2718065 I've got no idea...
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2718461 Nothing at all images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121209075030/callofduty/images/7/79/Hijacked_Load_Screen_BOII.png
More Feels... nice.
I see what you did there.
i don't get the
reference
3421153 burying the hatchet is another term for making peace.
2752097 holy shit thats funny
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3085832 lol so I'm not the only one who caught it then! Good!!! XD
2752097 then the titanic appears...
I'm sad... I wanna see Clayton come back