A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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Damn...
Good chapter and the chapter title was perfect for this. Seems ominous and...well dark.
And the veritable wall of shit has hit the fan.
Damn right fucker deserves it.
Mind: Blown
How do you miss with a shotgun?
Shit meet fan, Fan meet shit....NOW KISS
3015026
Damn near as easily as with any other gun.
Welll shiiit ;)
Allons-y
I have a feeling Scootaloo wont be as proud of Ivan as I was.
See? Now he HAS to adopt her. although it may not go very smoothly
3015026 when the target is far away
3015026 Because unless the shotgun is of the sawed-off variety, the shot spread angle isn't nearly as wide as you would think.
3015026 have you even shot one? it's about as easy as with any other gun, really
I didn't see that coming
...he... hurt... Rainbow...
...
...
The level of disgust, loathing, hate and rage directed against that pony has reached biblical levels...
I had hoped something like this wouldn't happen, since it happens in pretty much every single story...
3015395
That would be an interesting change from the norm. To have that create real conflict between "positive" characters is unusual.
3016465 Scoot's dad breaking Rainbow's wing?
well then..............murder that bitch!
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No, it's this:
Offensive pony gets into argument with human
->offensive pony starts physical fight with human
->offensive pony gets beaten badly/killed
Though the part where the human had to pull a knife to stand a chance was pretty original, and I almost forgot about that.
And I'm really curious what'll come of this, since Scootaloo still seemed to value her father somewhat- even if that wreck has fallen far from where he once was.
3016538 Personally, i couldn't care less how unoriginal something is. Conflict is conflict, no matter where it comes from! Gotta love conflict.
3016340 He's already dead. BURN IN HELL SCOOTS DAD. I could honestly care less what happens to him.
...
I'm not a good person.
If a mother fucker broke into my house and hurt my girlfriend...
I would tear him to pieces.
Make good use of that sword Ivan.
I know I would.
3016074
I have shot one and unless your using slugs its pretty hard to miss a stationary target.
3016728 depends on range, though
Chop him into little pieces with the sword. Buy a bag of lime, dissolve the body. Then act like rainbow crashed through the window and hurt herself.
At least that's what I would do.... fucker doesn't even deserve recognition for his death, even if equestrian laws allow killing in self defence.
My foot hurts now...
3016597
I disagree with you there. Conflict just for the sake of conflict can easily detract from the logic of a given scenario, when it's not driven by understandable reasons- see Conflict Ball. I'm not saying that's happened here, by the way; I'm just saying that conflict a equals conflict b isn't true.
3015604 ...
3017890 And then the cops would ask everyone who scoot a loo's dad last fought or whatever and they would put 2 to 2 together and you will be in jail.
3020253
They can't prove it without the body!
BRUTAL! And quite nice. Great job to you and your proofreader.
Well, first of all congratz to AB for being able to craft a great sword^^
Second... That was unexpected.... but not unwelcome. Scoots dad is a character I absolutely hate in 98% of the cases so.... burn in hell asshole
3017992 Yeah i understand where you are coming from with that.
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3043515 That's awesome, dude! I'm just cringing at the how I used to write, lol. Definitely reblogging this later.
I'm actually pretty impressed you were able to sing and play the song at the same time. I've never been able to do that with this one.
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It's a great story and I'm happy to read it. I just lucked out with knowing how to play the song so that's why I gave it a try. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Damn, is he dead?
well.....................................shit
An event of this magnitude has happened to me before.
Some idiot tried to break into my house possibly thinking there was nobody home. Since there are many ways to get around the house and the fact he had a gun I took my hunting knife with me. I snuck up behind him and yanked his feet towards me making him fall forwards. Stabbed him in both shoulders to immobilize him and punched him in the back of the head. When the cops asked what had happened I replied that I was acting in defense of my property. Though now I think it was unecessary to stab his shoulders.
Dosent sound that believable right?
3075995 Well, first of all, kudos on the ninja skills. Second, you were nice enough not to kill the guy when you had the chance, which makes it completely necessary.
I mean, suppose he hadn't been disabled from the punch. He has a gun, which doesn't require much effort to pull the trigger at point-blank. If he managed to roll over and face you, that would be all he needed, especially with an eight- or nine-round magazine. Or six-shot revolver, whatever he had.
So, good job on your part.
Would've finished him. You don't break into my house and hurt my family. Hell if he got away I'd go all "taken" on his ass. "I will find you and I will kill you."
(Reads chapter)
Oh, well fuck me with a pancake.
I wonder how Scootaloo is going to react
I'll freaking kill you ,scootaloo say's Ivan runs away in fear screaming like a little girl.