A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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great chapter! keep up the good work
can't wait til' the next chapter.
As Spike put it once: This won't end well...
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That's all I have to say.
Of fucking course.
Oh, and by the way. I need your guys's thoughts on something. Should I write clop? If I do, I'm posting it on my pastebin, since this is a teen-rated story. It would be my first time, but I guess there's a first for everything...
So yeah, what do you think?
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I say be adventurous and give it a go. I'm certuain you'll do fine with it. Plus, if its clop relating to this story, it will be a supportive bit to the story between RD and Ivan. But still, if not, I still say, "Go for it!"
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Yeah, it'll be for the story. My proofreader complimented me on the more 'sensual' parts of the chapter, if you know what I mean... Made me wonder if I should give it a go.
When there's clop, I'll give you guys a link to my pastebin. Just gotta clear it of all the weird shit I used to write when I first started.
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Cool. Cool. If you're going to be posting a link, I'm cool with it, but in the future, I assume you'll be labeling your story to have clop in it just make it seem more fitting and probably be placing it in the actual story here.
Anyways I'm pretty sure your proofreader enjoyed your 'sensational' writing.
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oh god shes in heat! i love lyra's personality xDD and creams too :D not to mention the fact everyone thinks and talks to him like hes alot older then he seems and there all about to get a surprise at the party xD
that fake pen i bet ALL my bits that its actually a vibrator
Well, so far this has been pretty interesting. Read plenty of HiE fics, but there have been so many original ideas in this one to have it stand out. Ah if only I didn't have a real life to attend to, I'd be able to knock out the rest of the story in a few hours.
Ah well...
Hilarious, insightful, well written, original, witty, unpredictable...this, ladies and gentlemen, is the god tier of hie fics. Excellent work. You, good sir, have earned a like, fave, and follower.
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Believe it or not, not ALL of us are slobbering horndogs. Patience and anticipation more often than not enhance a sexual encounter and make it that much better.
3658433 The Arbiter, ever the voice of reason
I really like the way the characters are set up, nice job.
I won't keep beating a dead horse (so to say) I loved how you dealt with actual equine mannerisms, the licking, Ivian not eating meat (just the pasta of the Spagetti) and Rarity Still theother confusions but there are things in the story that are done VERY well