A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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i dont see why it wouldnt also be called 69, face-to-flank sounds alot like ass-to-mouth thou, i might refrain from using it
3501802 Well, the pony symbols for 6 and 9 are different from the arabic ones.
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What about "head to haunches"? Or "nether-nuzzling?"
On real-life equines I think the flank is actually well...the sides. The area past the ribs. The closest analogue I can think of to compare it to a human would be the regions were someone can poke you in the kidneys. Ya'know, the squishy area below your ribcage.
Just a thought.
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3502863 Ah, stupid mistakes thanks for telling me.
3502353 I like 'nether-nuzzling'... may use that.
And, well, since most people on here use it to refer to the haunches, that's what I'll continue to go with. But it's good to know, thanks for the info.
I think somebrony's been readin Technicolour Dom-In-8-Ion
Well, that was sweet, nice little date followed up by full-on sex. What more can I ask for?
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Not a problem.
3502353
"Haunch-hickie," perhaps?
the "Twist"
I heard it from Gentleman for Mares
3503158 Mm, actually a friend suggested I do something with bondage. I don't really like rape-esque stories. Glad you liked it though
3503720 I might use that. I'm surprised I hadn't remembered it though, since GFM was a story I really enjoyed.
Love this story
moar. now. or ill turn you into a newt.
Oh and when is rainbow dash gonna get pergent I mean they've been doing it for quite a while so ya
3518880 Vast differences in nitrogen base sequences within the chromosomes disallow reproduction between man and pony.
Oh okay
Well cant wait till next chapter excited to read it
3521952 I'm excited to write it for you
Awesome!!! yu explain the story so good
Big fan of your story, just finished it, and gotta say, this is much better reading it than listening to it on YouTube, keep it up
3616810 Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so much!
Would you consider maybe Ivan comes to learn that it is in fact possible to send him back home, therefore he is faced with the dilemma of returning to his friends and family back home, and never returning to pony ville? Or would he stay, thus showing that his feelings for rainbow rises above all else, and deciding that he will remain by her side for all time? This could be a way for us to see if skootaloo would forgive Ivan, and show us how much Rainbow cares for him
So I powered through all these in a sitting and I've got to say. I do enjoy this story. Both the whole HiE part of it but the drama you up in. It feels right for each character. Now with that said I can speculate about what is going to happen in the next chapter.
Since both Twilight and Celestia wanted both Ivan and Dash here. It would most likely be because there is either another Human that knows Ivan maybe a brother or friend. It could also be the fact that more of his stuff from Earth is winding up in Equestria much like the hatchet from before. Or it could because of the attack that happened not to long ago with Scootaloo's father. Which I should point out I want to deck super hard core. But besides all that the only other thing that comes to mind is they found a limited time return to earth way causing to have a point between Ivan and Dash to decide to stay or go. Either Dash joins him on earth which could cause a lot of problems depending on how it's written or they both stay in Equestria. As for the different text is a nice touch and it can be used effectively between characters. I kind of want to see Scootaloo get adopted by Ivan and Dash since he makes more then enough to support both himself and Dash. That and has enough to go drinking as well. Well after the whole Scootaloo feels betrayed part. Which again I can agree with how it's written since the bastard of a father is still related to Scootaloo. Even when he's been no where near her life for at least a few years now. It does beg a few questions to my mind. What ever happened to Spike? Is he running the Library in Ponyville or is he with Twilight at the castle? I also would like to see Dash get her weather patrol duty back at some point just so she's not lazying about the house while Ivan's at work. Even though as she puts it she can get it done in 10 seconds flat. That it would also go back to the debt she feels she has with him so there's that possibility.
Now as for the clop. Honestly it's not bad I just wish there was a bit more with it. Maybe focus them in stand alone chapters. Maybe to have the two of them play out fantasies. Since Dash likes bondage in both spots maybe have a bit more fun with that. That and maybe Ivan throwing out a kink of his own. Also I can see Dash be a fan of Taio Cruz's Dynamite in the musical sense. It's a fun song. As for the paradox perplexing pink party pony that is Pinkie Pie. Well I want to see more fun with her between the Ivan and them. Maybe find out what ever happened with those magazines she got from him. Now that I think about it I could see Pinkie wiggling her way into a three way with Ivan and Dash. Course that could just be me talking here. As for Cream I out right love her as a character and Lyra. Where the fuck did she get her medical degree? Seriously if that mare can become a doctor then I'm a freaking genius getting a paycheck from a thought. The pen thing was priceless by the way. Now the booze for Scoots. Honestly I can see the cause some problems more for her dad because of the shadowy figure finding out she had it. She technically got it from her dad which could cause him to have a restraining order preventing him to see her. Which I think is for the best since the tripod bastard is out right asking for it. Is it bad that I want to take a baseball ball bat to his skull mortal combat style? Hell I could see this be a set up forcing some pony to adopt Scootaloo so her father can't intervene which would make the whole family thing work.
Oh on that note. The whole Applebloom making a sword. Honestly laughed my ass off on that one. What's next going to make him a broadsword and a 13mm jackal handgun? Damn that filly can make stuff I also would like to see Applejack suck it up a little more often and visit Ivan and Dash more to make amends for everything that has happened.
I guess that's all I got to say for right now. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
3629557 That's so cute. My god.
New Reading is UP!
Easily the best Dash - centric hie story in existence. You earned a skeptical fan with this one. It's always nice to read a human fic that isn't self- indulgent rubbish and this is far from that. You've created an intriguing and shockingly original story, a believable main character, and besides Fluttershy (who you've written beautifully, by the way), the pony characters are so spot -on that I'm beginning to accept thm as head canon. This is a masterpiece and my only lament is that it will end at some point. This isn't getting as much attention as it deserves.
3659427 Thank you I'm flattered that you took the time to read the whole story (so far) all the way through. I look forward to what you'll think of the up and coming chapters.
The best HIE story out there, please continue soon!!! Its been so intriguing all the way through and i hope you've had fun writing said story!!! All the characters are even lovable, even rarity :D gg man, gg
3696760 1) Idk, my grandpa told me that as a WW2 prisoner he used to look for dandelions to eat, so I assumed it had some nutritional value. Anyway, unless it's just indigestible by the human body and not poisonous, or just consumed in small doses, I would think that no real harm should come of eating dandelions.
2) I would assume ponies groom a bit more frequently and effectively than non-sapient equines. Also, you'll notice that ponies in the show never get hair on the furniture or anything of that sort. At least not that we can see.
3) I have a whole alphabet written out, which actually has more letters than the English alphabet. It's not a letter-to-letter translation; the way you spell things is based more on sound. Kind of like English before dictionaries were invented (that last part is because it's difficult to keep track of the way I spell things :P) Also, you might notice that capitalizations have their own symbol. Also, when this story is over, I'll be revealing the alphabet I created/used.
4) I actually looked up info regarding equine physiology, but decided that making certain things bear more similarity to humans than horses would be more appealing to the reader. For example, one of the things I decided to change was horse cum. Did you know that mare cum is often referred to as 'squash soup?' I'm sure you can guess why I left that out of this story.
5) I thought the fact that Ivan and the ponies speak the same exact language would be stranger, but hey, that's just me. I'm actually currently writing the chapter where I explain this, and would like to thank you for reminding me about the letters and numbers. I probably would've forgotten.
(By the way, I would like to note that as a nine-year-old, I decided to follow my grandpa's example and try eating a dandelion. Considering he told me that he also dug through garbage looking for things to eat, I probably shouldn't have tried to mimic him. Also, my older brother later told me that you're supposed to eat the part where the seeds are, and not the stem. In conclusion, however, I decided that it could use some salt.)
I totally cannot wait for the next chapter to come out! This HIE story has really kept me reading it. I first found it on youtube and then I could not wait for it anylonger and started hunting for it on here... I just got done reading from Still at the Beach pt2 to this chapter... I totally can't wait for the next one!
I did not see why twilight send him a urgent letter and want to talk about it.
but I might have an idea later epic plot twist twilight now know how to send him will leave? *suspenseful music*
When has this been last updated?
3927359 Months ago. But, the newest chapter should be up this week, tomorrow hopefully. Just been really, really busy, but in a few weeks that should change, and I'll probably be able to get back to once-a-week updates again.
Feels bad to keep everyone waiting, but... I have a shot at achieving something extraordinary, and I've been working hard for it. Like I said, things should be back to normal in a few weeks, but for now, I'm working my butt off day and night, and there's really no free time for me. Plus, there's the fact that writing is kinda hard to do when you feel half-dead from sleep-deprivation, so there's that .
Well thanks thought
Why is it that RD is epic when guitars are playing in the background even when she's out on a romantic date?^^ lol^^ Only RD can pull that off^^
Scoots though... I'm worried about her now...
I love the storyline can't wait for chapter 32
One question, what will be the estimated date until chapter 33 sneaky? Reply when you read this. By ThatBronyKid956. Your fan.