A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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I lost it at the re-edit of "Hot Dickings: Chapter Twenty-Rape."
And apparently, the proofreaders. still managed to sneak something by.
Also; you should post the "proofread" chapter as an omake. It is your solemn duty.
The actual chapter still calls Fluttershy a cunt.
WOW >:| Those peeps need to get shot, all you did was ask for help and they fuck it up like that? If you're in need of a hitman you know where to come to dude.
Huh.
Dude, you may want to do some quick Edits. Like, now. I don't think you meant for Fluttershy to be referred to as a 'great cunt', and 'always ready to offer herself'.
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This was great, good job :D
Cant wait to wait a month before next update, thinking about it makes me want to cry and sneeze at the same time XD
Welp, hope its a fastnext part :D
Ps, amazing editing XD
eesh, everyone in this family is keeping some serious secrets, they should all start talking.
missed a word. hurry. its already way out of place.
delete my comment when you're done fixing. no one is allowed to know about this slip up!
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Fuck. You know, I can't actually remember what originally went in place of the 'ready to offer herself' part, but if you remove 'cunts,' it actually fits quite nicely.
5080680 Quiet you
You left the cunt in the chapter
I really hope he throws RD out.
5080577 Thanks, but it's all in good fun. We do this to each other every once in awhile, just... never on this scale before.
I'll get my payback soon, don't you worry.
5080480 Unfortunately, I deleted all the comments! Don't know if I can bring them back or not, because the 'proofread' version of this really was a work of art.
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Fuck, I removed it, but some people still see it.
Laughed hard on the author's notes. Sure, it was immature....but it was FUNNY immature! <---- Ivan, kick her out!
Careful author, your editors might give you a run for your money with that amazing writing.
great chapter, with idiotic author's notes that remind me of my friends and me, love the story still!
Wonderful chapter! ALSO!!!
That comments section!
What an awesome chapter. Keep up the awesome work and stay awesome.
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If I were him and heard a recording of the conversation she and Scootaloo had while he was gone, I sure would. Jesus H. Christ, where to begin...
Wow. Okay then...
Yes.
Smooth, Scootaloo. The classic, "Put them on the defensive before they get a chance to process what you said" trick. Also, funny how she leaves out the part about the bottle and the fact that she just went there to start shit.
W-w-what?!
Of course she does, ignoring the fact that they are not legally allowed to be together.
The fuck? Where is this conclusion coming from? The big box of "Ways to irrationalize Ivan's rational behaviour"?
"Scootaloo, I am dissapointed in you. Mildly. Very mildly. Actually, I barely care, lol."
"Genuine inquisition"? Sure....that's a perfectly logical way to look at the situation.
I have no words. It seemed like any time RD even began to feel some remorse, she would say something that just made me grind my teeth. Oh well, at least Fluttershy seems to give a shit.
Angry mare's are angry
5086407 It's all second-person, but instead of calling the main character just 'Anonymous' or something to that effect I gave him a name
Wow, Rainbow has fucked up ROYALLY twice. I think the third will push Ivan overboard and it'll Rainbow's/ another pony's fault. It seems to have become the latter at this point.
I lost my shit at the proofreading section OMG! Fantastic story as usual.
FUCKING LOVE THIS 100% I READ EVERY CHAPTER AND I FUCKING LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 33.....I wish i can write a story...
5099167 Thank you Really makes my time writing worth it to know that someone's enjoying it!
And you know, it never hurts to try...
5138234 I don't like giving ETAs, but I can tell you that the next chapter has about 1800 words written.
By Sneaky. That guy that does Close Bonds
Have you heard of a fic called " The Chase " it has 227 chapters! That's crazy and awesome. Derp
Can't wait for the next chapter. I can read Close Bonds forever, and the storyline is the thing that caught my attention. I first saw this on YouTube and thought, "Oh, another fic with Rainbow Dash." And the title, "Close Bonds" also caught my attention. From reading the title, I could already tell that it was gonna be a romantic fic and I'm the type who likes romantic fics with Rainbow Dash. NOT IN THAT WAY !! ........Anyways, back to the topic. It immediately grabbed my attention from the title, when I listened to it, I knew I have made the right choice. So keep on making fantastic stories for everyone to enjoy. -ThatBronyKid956 Your fan
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm loving this story so much!
Its been quite a while since the last chapter has been posted. Hope everything is well on your end.
dude, i like love this story and stuffs
but fimfiction says he hasn't been online for 5 weeks ( 4 weeks 6 days)
please tell me this story, including the others isn't dead?
5591596 but if story was not kill then what was?
5671779 Oh my gerd
How big are these ponies.
You make rainbow able to move at the speed of freaking speed, and honestly if shes like 3-4 feet tall and all, i would be hard pressed for her to be that strong for a little pony. Even if it takes little effort to punch the floor and make the windows rattle- as stated she hit the floor and made the windows shake. oh and please don't make Ivan just forgive her, it will hurt the story and make it seem lazy.
I hope you didn't stop writing Close Bonds story it is Awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OK i plan on reading this anything that stands out from the crowd? also how in celestia's name is this not finished it has like 10 million chapters but you know that's none of my business
5683554 I know I'm really, really late, but I've stomped hard enough to rattle the windows. Only the nearby ones though, and not by a lot probably should've made that clearer.
And don't worry, nothing is ever that easy.
5867654 hehehe, little tired when i wrote that. but i can take it.
like some episodes make the ponies strong and some makes them weak. i'll except what you put. sorry
This is what a relationship looks like when two abusive people live together. This relationship is toxic and they definitely shouldn't have a kid involved is all that.
I realize this makes for a great story but RD's personality portrayed in the show would never stoop down to this level, Diamond Tiara and her mother on the other hand.... Seen it irl too many times. (not all snooties are bad tho)