A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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Well then... that was interesting
so cream has beer, another receptionist called cherry finds said beer and decides to flirt with a criminal who then decides to give said beer to his underage daughter. who is now adopted by the resident human and hot head rainbowdash. its all coming full circle!
I cant help but react to all the exposition the way Nostalgia critic did.
But I Loved this chapter any ways
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4847366 Hehe I spent the latter part of this afternoon wondering how often my readers think, "Oh, boy. He's doing it again, Ma."
4847752 You wanna know the odd part? I actually sang that song as it started.
I'm so glad this is continuing!
Keep it up Sneaky!
Hold on....getting my 'Equestrian to English' dictionary.
Hmm...
'Farts in Your Soup'...?
Did I read that right?
4848727 LOL no, but still, not a bad idea for a nametag.
4848509 Sure thing
This was a great chapter, loved it, but i have this feelng im going to love the next even more. I have this feeling that scoots is in for a massive talking to, and might run away, just my guess. Cant wait though :D
I'm quite pleased with this chapter!
Goddamnit this means I'm gonna be checking Fimfiction everyday now just to see when this story is gonna be updated again. I love it!
Meanwhile, in my food cupboard...
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I know it's not a perfect match, but it was all I could think about for the rest of the chapter.
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Forgot that there was no milk being poured into the bowl when I wrote that. Oh well
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The gorilla's face looks like it should have "dat ass" in big letters above his head. Clearly he likes what he sees...
That was an interesting piece I got to say. Feels a little bit filler but I'm guessing you're building up to an epic final.
I've been a big fan of this series from the word go, so great job as usual, keep it up
Capital at the start of the second sentence
Other than that, looking good mate!
5894796 Fixed! Thanks!
I see a bad moon rising