A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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you have more haters than me
btw you know you can hyperlink with
[url=(url here)](stuff here)[/url]
right?huh, the code brackets weren't supposed to show... ignore those
2530254 Well, I don't even neeEEeed his ruv
Yeah, and I was going to do that, but iPods can be a bitch so I meant to do it after the chapter was posted to make it easier but then I got sidetracked and yeah...
Sappy endings are so sappy.
Hm, Fluttershy is such a little thief. In an adorable sense of course.
Hmm, quite the nice chapter you have here. I like it how Futtershy can, in addition to being a thief at times, that she can use her shyful appearances to her advantages in a conversation to get out of a sticky situation like the the group of three that approach her. I really like your adaptation of FS. Anyhow, it's nice to see that you produce quite the hilarious scenario in the story like some that is between Ivan and Rainbow Dash, my favorite so far is with Ivan telling a story at the campfire to annoy her.
Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work. By the way, truth be told, I was thinking that the one who enter the room at the beginning of this chapter would have been Lyra, but it was good enough with Rarity at the scene.
Poor Ivan, cockblocked at every turn.
I wonder if Ivan has
on his iPod.
He'd better have.
xD oh ivan life can be so cruel sometimes xP glad this chapter :D updated i was starting to miss it
2531404 Hehe more trickyshy coming up
2531506 Did you know that the campfire scene was based off of something that happened in real life? Just swap Rainbow for my sister, Ivan for me, and there you have it.
2531526 I know. I almost feel bad for him.
Not. :P
2532770 Nope sorry. But every time I see your name, I think of an album by Iron Maiden.
2541285 Yeah, it was taking a long time because I didn't even plan this chapter out. I just got done planning the next one, though.
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Solid, man. Keep rockin' on.
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Good. As long as she doesn't try to steal my TARDIS, I'll be looking forward to more.
2543687 awesome can wait to see it then! :D
2543687 Ahh, you are quite the smart cookie you are, to use your real-life interactions and then integrated into a fictional story. I wonder what other scenes from before are based from your social life? Nonetheless, it resulted in quite the enjoyable scene. Well done, I have to say, well done indeed.
2545331 You'll be seeing another one in the next chapter, actually... And Derpy's character in Derpy's Protector is actually based a lot off my own personality... Just a bit exagerrated, and less intelligent. (I would hope so, at least. :P )
2545606 Fascinating. Granted, I have yet to read your other stories that you made, but what you described for Derpy's Protector sounds quite interesting. Perhaps I'll take a shot at it sometime after I had caught up with other stories that I've been missing for sometime now.
This in my opinion is one of the best reads out there. I love the dialogue, description, and ideas. The personalities are unique and interesting and every character has a personality. I really enjoyed this because its a light hearted romance story not filled with ridiculous amounts of drama.
2547830 Thank you. I do appreciate this comment.
Rainbow called Freebird lame... i'm sorry that just doesn't line up to me. Yet again I am a huge fan of Classic Rock. Still though, great chapter!
You dare mock "Free Bird" Rainbow Dash!? YOU MUST DIE! lol. Good chapter.
Rainbow dash's blasphemy aside, Ivan's story reminded me of futurama with Fry and that robot. "Oh no! She stuck in an infinite loop and he's a moron."
Coheed and Cambria? never heard of them, hers the musik vid for the rest thats hasn't a clue who they are.
Pickpocket increased to 95
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Darude - Sandstorm
Brain.exe has stop working.
2896419 my sentiments exactly. That solo is legendary. It's a 9-minute song that doesn't even drag on.
Ok I've decided this story isn't for me. Some of the characters are not in character. And when did ponies have human swears and mannerisms. And tbh It's not that interesting for me. But thats just me, so good luck with the story and other stories.
6102258 let your eye adjust, not eyes. You said he was blind in one eye thanks to a pencil accident when he was 5