A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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This is good.
I don't think everyone wants to see clop :P maybe a warning before the scene perhaps?
I go with choice: (B) because it would make sense to do so. I mean, in story, in it's current state, has already mentioned finding the right moment to "do it" with Rainbow. Plus, this story already has some type of corolation in taking the next step in a relationship.
You can also put a warning when the clop chapter comes up in the story. Then the readers will be aware.
Imma go with B also, great chapter man
great chapter, keep up the good work
D) Zero fucks given either way.
Also, about the story:
i.imgur.com/KUcxf.jpg
2349853 Heheh. Love these.
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I've given it a few days, this is what I'm going with. Thanks for your input
2338894 thanks :D
Edit: If you're planning on continuing to follow this story, make sure you check the 'view mature' box.
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Yes, you do.
Irrelevant:
2349995 Do I have something in my nose?
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Fail embedding is fail.
C:
and no, I don't think there's anything there that I can see.
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Try this. http://youtube.com/watch?feature=relmfu&v=gq7MvLgxSB4
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Oh, there it is. Yeah... yeah, you got it.
Also I'm bored give me something to do.
2350124 sorry was writing. Hm, idk, give me an idea for a one-shot you would like to see done. I might do it after this chaptet, don't wanna get burnt out on CB
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Ace Ventura does Equestria.
...SHIKAKA!
2350723 oh shit! Forgot about him. Let me think of how I can do that, then I'll get back to you in an hour or so.
2350723 If I do it, it's going to be a while. I would have to watch the movie again, and then figure out a plot... Not to mention detective stories take a lot of planning... We'll see.
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2351256 we'll see. But for now, let's stop spamming the comments with our conversation.
you know I love how you write this without any shame^^ makes this whole thing a pretty good read^^ Also... I don't know why but I kinda feel sorry for Ivan^^;
2362335 No shame... I think I know what you mean. I've found that if it's not fun to write, it's not fun to read. Therefore, I have fun ^.^
And I suppose you should feel sorry for him... But don't worry, it's about to get better ;)
2362827 I mean that you include stuff like that dripping blood line^^ Or Pinkie openly asking im if the sex was good^^ I think this is the only fic I have read yet where stuff like that is said out so... flatly^^ I like that^^
Oh boy... more hummiliation comming his way... CANT WAIT!
2363051 hehehe... I've done worse.
But I'm glad you like it. Near finishing the next chapter
2363945 really? awesome! Cant wait to read that one^^
2369177 Because I like the word 'kleptoshy'.
That's seriously the reason.
xDD hahaha ive been cracking up laughing throught this whole chapter xD that prank was gold! the personality of ivan i love very much as well hes someone easily relatable to i also like the way he wants his first time to be something special ^w^ i HAVE to fave this story its too good not too :D
2520629 There's no point in saying no offence if you are calling him autistic to insult him. Then you are being intentionally offensive anyway -.- I don't really see your problem with the guy. The writer explained the guy's reasoning for not going to see Rainbowdash. The reason why he closed the door and didn't check up on her is because of the same reason and thats because she is in estrus >:l
Just some stuff I found:
CH2: Dandelions fall under the daisy family, and tend to not be good for humans, unless ingested in small amounts as part of a tea.
CH2: When licking a horse, no matter how clean they are, you would still get a rather large amount of hair in your mouth.
CH3: As for the Equish language, I'm going to assume that there is no actual structure, and you just put in random unicode.
CH4: Did you know that equine estrus only happens from late march, to early october, and lasts 19-24 days per heat?
Also, you lose points for using 2 arabic languages and some greek in place of numbers.
FYI, "શૂ έ ಮ" means Shoe, Embryo, Ma. in three separate languages. Pretty sure that last one is just a phonetic pronunciation though.
I finally upvoted this after chapter three...just wanted to let you know...
3696760 Ez pony dandelions, ez pony heat, ez pony fur, ez pony language. Let that be an explanation. Not hoarse. There is no way you can apply any of these thoughts to neon coloured magical flying ponies.
Just a personal note, not enjoying the build up..I get it already.... Ivan wants RBD, and they are Hot to trot
That was when my tee met my keyboard.
5515485 that statement made my coffee kit the monitor
Uh....he thinks estrus is like menstrual cycle?