A second-person telling of Ivan's day-to-day life in his ragtag relationship with Rainbow. Ragtag, because what they have is far from ideal. But that's what makes it enjoyable, right?
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As much as I love this story. It hurt helping with this chapter. Poor Dashie.
4970968 I agree
I never thought I'd have to say this in a serious tone ever but... That escalated quickly. It dern sure did.
Wait. Did she just tell him to leave his own house? The one that he's paid for and decided to let her live in because, in spite of the frequent drama, he loves her?
That's wrong on so many levels, man.
While i agree that Dash had some small right to be upset. Ivan had an even greater right, what he had to talk about was extremely important and Dash's constant interruptions and undermining was frustrating and eventually enraging. While Ivan spoke very poorly at the end he had every right to be infuriated.
4970968 4971187 Poor Dashie? This a goddamn abusive relationship. She's struck Ivan now twice. If the genders were switched everybody would be on Dash like stink on shit. And yes guy, that was fucked up on so many levels. Any level of sympathy she had just went in the toilet.
Damn. So what happened that made Ivan so angry? I'm concern about that little detail.
4971434 read CH30
This is why you pull your significant other to the side before confronting the child and tell her what's going on so you can both present a unified front when confronting the child.
~ A Forever Alone Princess Celestia
4971448 Okay THAT makes more sense now. Huh, honestly I thought it was a timeskip chapter.
4971457 you're welcome friend
4970968 Yes, poor Dash. What if she hurt her hooves abusing her boyfriend?
Wow. Ivan and Dash sure suck at communicating when they are angry.
...Oh right...the title.
Loose lips...[Finish Title here].
Clever, Sneaky. Clever indeed.
amazing chapter i can't wait for the next one
Really good chapter, but you left off on a cliffhanger, AND A BIG ONE!
I cant wait to see what happens though, please upload next part quickly :D
I didnt really see this coming btw, great job on that part :)
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Oh... Whoops now I see how my comment looks.
Lemme rephrase: Poor Dashie, she was only trying to help. And i can't really feel sorry for Ivan, because he did kinda have that coming. Besides, they wont stay mad at each other long.
(inside knowledge)
4974287 Physical abuse is never excusable. And lets be honest, her shit has gotten stale. She needs to shape up and quickly..
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There is no stare flat enough I can give.
What? Isn't this Ivan's house?
Either I missed/forgot something big recently, or RD is being a bitch. Is he not supposed to be upset? He gives Scootaloo a second chance, and didn't she pretty much try to make things worse by going to the hospital? And Rainbow does realize he refused to go home for her, right? I'm not saying that automatically makes him right in everything he does, but I think he deserves a little more respect.
Feel free to correct me if I have anything wrong, because I'm kind of confused. I've been a bit distracted as of late, so I might have forgotten something.
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I can try.
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Not trying to get all MRAfag on everyone, but there seems to be this trope in media where when it comes to arguments, the man (or the bigger asshole of them, if it is two men) is always wrong. I don't like making a big deal of it, and I don't want to bash the author (this is one of the better HiE stories in my opinion), but it gets kind of tiring. Would it be too much for the woman to get kicked out once in a while?
Abandon ship!!!
Honestly? It was a good story up until this chapter. Things here make both main characters seem uber bi-polar, and out of character, considering the story so far. Sorry, but I can't reconcile these two throwing that much shit at each other, and honestly I can't see Rainbow being that much against Ivan questioning Scoots. I can see her being confused and worried, but mostly backing up Ivan when the truth really starts to come out. Also, this was a golden opportunity for family bonding, and in my opinion, you flubbed it, big time.
This is coming off my favorites list. After this big shitstorm, I can't see them forgiving each other, and any attempt to do so will just feel hollow.
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4980853 Not everything gets solved peacefully, especially between two agitated partners. Ivan has always been portrayed as the calm, collected one up until now, but as demonstrated, he has his moments too. Rainbow still hasn't really deviated from her normal character.
And it's a fantasy romance story, so of course they're going to make up somehow. I would stick around if I were you to at least give the reconciling a fair judgement; you may be surprised.
Sorry to see you leave, though.
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Okay, you've twisted my arm. Honestly not hard to do, all things considered, but still... I'll keep an eye on this story, just because it is one of my favorites (up until now, anyway) and I really don't like leaving things unfinished... although it seems fairly finished to me.
I have to agree with the sentiment that this chapter broke some of the consistency in your characters. A lot of strange anger and shit flinging going on with the strangest result at the end. It's as if everything went to hell, but with unclear reasons as to why beyond both parties being douchebags and presented in a confusing manner. Dropping this off my favorites to my tbr list for now, as it seems the story is losing the thread that got me hooked in the first place.
Can't wait for the next chapter so excited.
5010784 Me too so please hurry up!!!
The drama, it pleases me.
Me too MrGreviouss
Ahhh nothing like re reading this fic in full to remind myself how awesome it is and how much I look forward to the day there's more toread
Wow I'm not really sure where all this hostility is coming from. Just say what needs to be said and be done with it. You leaving open endings to what you say is allowing rainbows insecurities fill in the holes. And you are kinda bein an asshole.