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A nice sad story with a different take on Trixie's origins.
Existing as a fragment of another soul, not the way I would want to live.
Two words of critisism.
1. Double check your page breaks as they spill out onto a second line. Looks messy.
2. It is spelt Chrysalis, not Chrysalys.
Other than that, impressive.
Spelling mistakes (Chrysalis). The story was a bit choppy but I will give it a thumbs up.
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville
You killed Chryssie?
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Afraid I have no option but to downvote. She's in my top 5 favorite characters.
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I think you have not read the translation of the first two lines in Latin.
This was definitely a take on Trixie I haven't read before. Even though I don't like the idea of Trixie no longer existing, I will upvote and fav because it's original and well written. You know, if Twilight sees Luna in that hat and cape, she will know it was Trixie's.
2134332 Oh. OK.
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I usually surprise people. Even though my other stories are comedy and a mystery-adventure whazoo, I felt I have to write this one.
Well technically they didn't die, they reunited. Still not a lot room to act in, though.
As for Twilight... maybe. I think her naivety combined with a few well-placed lies could lift the suspicion from Luna.