• Member Since 7th Oct, 2012
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I had no idea


Trixie Lulamoon.
Braggart, performer, and vengeful villain.
Why did she choose to go to Ponyville in the first place? Why does nopony know anything about her?
Why doesn't anypony know where she has gone?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

A nice sad story with a different take on Trixie's origins.

Existing as a fragment of another soul, not the way I would want to live.

Two words of critisism.
1. Double check your page breaks as they spill out onto a second line. Looks messy.
2. It is spelt Chrysalis, not Chrysalys.

Other than that, impressive.

Spelling mistakes (Chrysalis). The story was a bit choppy but I will give it a thumbs up.
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

You killed Chryssie? :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
Afraid I have no option but to downvote. She's in my top 5 favorite characters.

I think you have not read the translation of the first two lines in Latin.:pinkiehappy:

This was definitely a take on Trixie I haven't read before. Even though I don't like the idea of Trixie no longer existing, I will upvote and fav because it's original and well written. You know, if Twilight sees Luna in that hat and cape, she will know it was Trixie's.

I usually surprise people. Even though my other stories are comedy and a mystery-adventure whazoo, I felt I have to write this one.
Well technically they didn't die, they reunited. Still not a lot room to act in, though.
As for Twilight... maybe. I think her naivety combined with a few well-placed lies could lift the suspicion from Luna.

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