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Arkansandragon


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They thought it was just another exciting story when the new book came out. But Twilight Sparkle and her friends soon learn that all fiction hides truths.

Some more deadly then others.

For Twilight and her friends, what began as a mere foal's story soon becomes a whirlwind of mystery and danger. As strange events begin to center around Ponyville, the fate of Equestria once again rests in their hooves.

MLP: FIM / Assassin's Creed

p.s. The cover was made by me. :)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 21 )

How does this story not have more likes and comments. Seems like a really great start. Keep it up buddy. Can't wait to read more.

To be honest, this was pretty good. However, there's one thing bugging me: chapter length. They're too short! Everything happens too fast! Everything from all of these chapters could have easily formed just one of decent length. If you want my advice, try to aim for around two to three thousand words per chapter.

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Glad you like it, and I know about the chapter length problem. I'm currently rewriting them.

Is more coming? I would like to read more.

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More is coming. :) I'm just working on other projects too, so it's taking awhile. Plus, I'm trying to re-write the first few chapters to clean them up better.

5244519 Sure, I'm just getting into Assassin's Creed, made few stories myself. I have two of them right now. One is Pony Creed: Last of the Assassins and the another is Pony Creed: Changeling. Check them out when you have the chance.

5746228 It is, but I'm also working on other projects at the same time. It's taking a bit longer than I'd like, but yes, it will be continued.

Interesting chapter you have here. :twilightsmile:

YOU ACTUALLY UPDATED. ACCEPT MY HUGS. :pinkiehappy:

Seems things are about to get good.

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Thanks for the hugs. :pinkiesmile: Also, new a chapter is up! :yay:

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Sadly my computer is still broken. :fluttercry: I can write from my phone but it takes longer. And I'm also currently busy with other things right now.

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

So is this story dead, or will it be continued/redone at some point?

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I plan to rewrite it at some point in the future to clean up those first few chapters and tie the plot together better.

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