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Dramatic Stories


Dude I made this account like 5 years ago and all my writing was cringy af I'm so sorry

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Scootaloo grew up some of her fillyhood in an orphanage that belonged to a widowed mare and her dead husband. But the rest of her life up to the present have taken place on the streets of Ponyville, where she has made a reputation for being one of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and the town 'bum'. She wonders what the rest of her life up until her death every day. Where she'll end up, who she'll meet. It's part of the question that experience must answer.
One day, Scootaloo comes across a new store that has opened near sugarcube corner. What lies inside interests her to the fullest...and will change her life forever...(foreveeeeer)
******Assassin><Ponies Crossover-Inspired by Assassin's Creed 3******

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 43 )

Wait....if Scootaloo's dad was an Assassin...then they were murdered by TEMPLARS! :pinkiegasp:

OMG AWESOME AWESOME!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

great start for the first chapter everybody :yay: (I wasn't expecting this much feedback on such short notice) :rainbowderp:

i think you should mention the assasin thing in the description.
Still cool:rainbowdetermined2:

Nice story, but U have a few issues....Non grammar errors though.

1) How does Scootaloo from being an orphan to Assassin count as a slice of life?

2) I think this might have to be a Crossover tag since the storyline's a bit too similar to the Assassins Creed games.

3) The cover image might needs to be changed. It kind of fooled me thinking it's just Scootaloo being alone and needing help. I didn't know it would come to this....

Sorry for the nitpick, but it kind of bothered me a lot......:twilightsheepish:

2729824Thanks for criticizing and not just hating. helps a lot /)

I imagine Holora voice as Optimus prime from Transformers...

i love this but it feels a little rushed i know you said its to get to the JUICY parts but it feels a little rushed but thats just my opinion
:eeyup:

Just remember both the brotherhood and the Templar are secret organizations.

Comment posted by Kamen Rider Dragons deleted Jul 14th, 2013
Comment posted by Kamen Rider Dragons deleted Jul 14th, 2013

What is "Assassins"? Where can I find out more about it?

Amazing! I need more of this fanfic ASAP! It's simply amazing and one of my favorites!

2622549 I, for one, think they were murdered by fire, but that's you choice.

2981107 Right...but who started the fire? :pinkiegasp:

This chapter wasn't really good in my opinion. They aren't supposed to know that Scootaloo is an assassin.

3029048 They aren't supposed to know, but guess what. The order's been around for a while, and characters have the ability to learn about their presence in the world, as well as the Templars. Secrets won't always stay a secret you know :ajbemused:

THE FINAL CHAPTERS ARE OUT, And the story has ended...or has it (Dun dun dun)

I held out hope for this fic but then everyone went as out of character as possible. Nobody batted an eye about the MURDER that just was revealed. No matter what the hell it was, the guards would have done their best to apprehend Scootaloo. I know Applebloom and company would have freaked out. If I became an assassin, killed someone and revealed it to a friend and they didn't bat an eye, I would start to suspect I might be in a dream world or something! This chapter convinced me not to read any further.

3044334 Something tells me you skipped through the chapter :ajbemused: (Spoilers->) Applebloom went to get Scootaloo because she knew what she was, and knew what she had to do. I based this chapter after the scene in Assassin's Creed 3 where Connor kills William Johnson. Don't let one chapter ruin an entire story for you

3042180 I don't want it to end! :flutterrage::raritycry::twilightangry2:

3059193 Oh don't worry...it's not over...You would know that if you read my blogs :pinkiehappy:

3061186 Just read it, I'm a follower! I. Love. This. Series. Just look at my reaction.

2913456 Assassin's Creed, possibly one of the best game series ever. No offence but I'm surprised you don't know about it.

*sniffs* This... This was the most touching story I have ever read.

I don't down right hate it, but your story could be so much better.:facehoof:
I'm sorry, your story is just not my cup of tea.:ajbemused:

Why must they always kill the father...? Yeah, you get feels, but it's so cliche...

Death to all Templars! I shall destroy them all! I will help you great Scoota-assassin. Together we shall find the observatory and defeat the Templars once and for all!

7027448 hey if you joining her I'm going with

7126405 the more the merrie. Tell you what, you can borrow my minigun while I use my sniper. That'll be fun

Not trying to be mean but you need to change "everybody" to "everypony"

the oath of loyalty to the brotherhood was a bit lame and there was no hesitation on scoots part of agreeing to it.
good story but it needs a little work.
good job

my little pony and assassins' creed story, quite interesting, although I never played assassins creed, but it’s still good

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