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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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no!!!!!!!!!!!! :fluttercry::twilightangry2:

Hmmmm this was interesting but I liked it.
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

2126837 Sure I'll look into it.

Though I don't like to think Mrs. Cake cheating on the Mr.
The Cake family are my favorite characters after all.
All that aside.
It was pretty cool shipping.
It was very imaginative, it wasn't half bad.

I like it when people are able to use characters in such a way.
Blue Blood was the perfect chose.

Thanks

2127053 No problem I am glad you actually enjoyed it.

I can't believe someone actually wrote this... but I freakin LOVE it!

2126923 I don't like it when people make mrs.cake a whore.

Good story, not so good word choice

I rate it 6/10 moustaches
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Well.

That takes care of one of the zeroes in the shipping chart, I guess.

The world choice is a bit wonky and you know you could have called her Cup Cake instead of Mrs. Cake all the time. Outside of that, no real qualms.

Now have Blueblood turn her into a mind broken sex slave with an NTR ending where Mr. Cake gets home only to find his wife in an gang bang and loving it. Blueblood would then come out and explain how he "accidentally" broke Mr. Cakes's wife and then buy's her for a meager price in order to spare Mr. Cake the shame of having a whore for a wife.
/Happy End:twilightsheepish:

sorry i did not like it i hate blue blood hate him but i gave it a chanc just one but it did not get atall good to my consent

6390281

Feel my balls empty into your soul.
FEEL THEM CARESSING YOUR INNER LOBE. BE AFRAID AT THE PROSPECT OF ANAL TEARING.

RUN

You know, I expected more food-based fetishes.

the guard at the beginning was just stupid if she really likes him, it was kind of a good chance.

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