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Epic chapter...10/7
No worries. I'm glad it's back on.
Good chapter.
but was is the doctor hiding??
As always, the dreaded finals. No matter where, they find a way to stop many things in life. Good things.
:O! ACTUALT PLOT DEVELOPING !! DEAR GOD THIS GON BE GUDD
Enjoyed the new chapter always enjoy reading this story dude!!! And if The Doctor is involved and is hanging his head in shame over a secret about Isaac. Lets just say I have a feeling that the shinola is about to hit the fan.
I loved the chapter man it was amazing I can't wait for the next thanks.
Good to see you're continuing the story, and good luck on your finals.
What did the doctor not want Issack to not know about? I have a lot of possibilities i can think of.
Great chapter. I too have final exams coming up. So I know that feeling.
Tech = Technologie, Computers and stuff.
Teach - Learning.
Love time travel humor.
Could use some editing and grammer in the second half, noticed a few errors.
So, what about Vinyl's offer to teach him?
i love to listen to people losing it when you're at the finals. some get mad, some gets sad, and others start laughing their asses off when they realize how screwed they are
Here are some Ideas for them to do in Isaacs house.
-Play throught the Halo Games
-Watch the Lord of the Rings Trilogie.
-Watch Game of Thrones
-Watch Starwars
-Play through the Call of Duty series
or... you know, just have a Orgy... Just by reading this chapter, I can FEEL the sexual tension.
2461940 it's pretty much the same logic as magic.
it's the doctor, i ain't gotta explain shit
ITS ALWAYS WATER
2461940 It's the doctor. No explination is required.
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hell yeah!
some things to note:
should be mistress Luna not master right?
wouldnt Issac be a little more pissed at mane six?
good things:
many opertunitys opened
good twists and more to come hopefylly
good lucckwith stuff
Elixir
Awesome! Story is continuing! Glad you didnt drop it.
And I see you really gave some thoughts to it. A lot of things explained (Gilda) and some mysteries for us to look forward for moar.
Keep it up!
Hmmmmmmm I'm starting to wonder...
Is Isaac a catalyst?
If so I wonder what for
hURRAY! NEW CHAPTER!
2462272 About being more angry at the mane six...
Twilight was really the only one that Isaac would feel angry at, considering how quickly the other five seemed to get over their fear of him. Twi blasted him with magic once on accident, then another time in panicked self-defense. Twilight's magic actually healed him the second time, and she did apologize very sincerely, so I don't think that it's too strange that Isaac had such an easy time forgiving.
The plot thickens!
I believe we might have a fixed point in our hands... Hmm... SO MANY POSSIBILITIES!!! Thanks for continuing this is great
Omg Isaac is in the animus!
and the plot thickens in a way I hope I see some gilda make up sex
Great chap bro.
Good luck on finals!
Excellent chapter. I knew the Doctor was hiding something.
I Find This Chapter Amazingly Epic......WIN WIN
This was way better than the last chapter, really enjoying the direction this is heading.
I get that the Doctor is hiding something, but Issac seemed too calm about the fact that the Doctor managed to jump dimensions and not try to suggest to take him back home. Then the Doctor says he is going to the 60s suggesting that he is going back the Issac's Earth. I'm not sure why nopony seems to notice.
Wow, feburary 12th is my birthday
2462272 with females I think you can say either or, just lime you can cask both genders handsome. Also some people just forgive really easily and he knows they didn't mean it
I'm happy you didn't just scrape the story, also Great Chapter!!!
Lets see what you've done in your short break on this story with a review:
Don't you mean Sith?
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You still make the Doctor as cool and badass as ever.
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Eh, close enough(Y U MAKE IT HARD for me to find the right clothes?)
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OH SHIT RUN!
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To find out what happens to the Doctor read:
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Does Luna have an ulterior motive in helping Issac?(Getting close to him to maybe get in his pants?)
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In early chapters Doc said that he cant take him home 'cause he is important to current event line, or something.
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I see what you mean but what I was trying to get at was Issac's "other side" and also because last chaoter was so full of energy and drama it was hard to believe the whole forgive and forget thing.
Walker:
just to say your imppimentation of Dr Wgooves is trully amazing
sorry for any spell/ grammar errors, my phone is a bitch to type on
thanks
Elixir =P
So... Luna's blood causes Ray Field radiation and Isaac's a conduit? I don't care, I love this story glad you carried on with it
Luna's blood gave him magic.
Magic carries memories and emotion.
Nightmare Moon was a emotion that took over.
Humans have a darkness in themselves that they always fight against, aware or not...
The echoes of a Luna's nightmare dances with Isaac's darkness and things go so very wrong...
I just go with a what I understand.
2465352 DUDE!!! WHY U SPOILER!!!
On a serous not yeh thet will be the future of this story maybe.
...Wait a second!
Are you the doctor?
2465916 I am not the Doctor but I do love to piece together magical mechanics that the author puts into his or her story, clop or not.
Also I may have taken a uneducated guess.
As for where the story goes from here I still can't be sure.
Who knows maybe this will allow him to get the mares he meets pregnant or maybe he just saves Equestria from himself or he simply takes it over.
I don't really know I just wait and see and hope the author is aware that I am paying attention to the story and characters.
Also sorry if I somehow spoil the story for the rest of you...
This fic...so much wrong with it I don't know where to start
You should have added after Twilight said SO MANY BOOKS, in small print like Fluttershy being shy you should have put I think I came.
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DUDE! I just thought about that! Animus bleeding effect ftw.
Even with the abundance of cliches and rather stereotypical Gary Stu-ing of the main character, it makes for a decent enough read. You've got some flowing plot lines in place, a heavy use of the doctor to facilitate a few things, and overall, the interactions are... okay.
You might want to try and find a person or two to give your stuff a once through after you're done writing it before releasing it though, there are typos throughout the chapters. Also, I noticed you underuse commas. You need a hell of a lot more than what is present. Beyond that, not too bad on that end.
Going in my favorites, it is holding my interest. An editor would really clean up 90% of the issues, just something to keep in mind for the future
I wonder if the doctor can reestablish his internet connection with Earth, oh men it will be so funny if Dash can watch her battle with Starscream. And Luna just got herself a student, I think she really was wanting for an opportunity like this. her Twilight Sparkle if you like to putting like that.
By the way, what is the animus?
2472226 Play Assasssins Creed and you'll know.
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Oh that animus, I though they meant the animus of Portal…yeah, its looks like he is going to train in there.
Oh I wonder if he will create a new spell that will recreate eagle vision?
That was not going all "Jedi". The fit of violent rage, he went all Sith on Gilda. Being raised by a major Star Wars fan requires me to tell you that Jedi do not go all berserk like that. That is what Sith do, it is in the tenets of the Sith Code to use fury. Just thought you should know the injustice here to Jedis.