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The RESPAWN (Reanimation Emulation Software for Preserving Authorized Weaponry and Neurons) system has been used ever since the REDs and BLUs have been at war. But a glitch in the system leads the mercenaries to an unusual setting.

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Adding zis to my tf2 group I joined. Looks good.

Oh, This story has great potential. I will be keeping an eye on you. But more then that, I cannot promise...

Hey, look! A good TF2 crossover! WOW!

That's not sarcasm btw.

the system leads the mercenaries to an usual setting

You sure you mean "usual"? I think only Pyro would be used to a place like Equestria.

2059662 Sorry 'bout that. I'll give that a little tweak.

I can't read Russian, how do you pronounce the last one?

Fluttershy seems a bit out of character. She opened up to Medic way too quickly.

Okay, let me say something, when two different people are speaking, use at least one space to separate them. For example.

"Gah! My leg!" The injured girl groaned, before she looked up at the Medic. "Not to worry. I'm a doctor." He said proudly. He kneeled down and moved Rainbow Dash's hands away from her leg, revealing a bleeding gash. "Nozhing to zevere. I can fix zhis." He said, aiming the Medi-gun at the girl. "Wait, what are you doing?!" Rainbow Dash said

It could be changed to this to make it clearer.

"Gah! My leg!" The injured girl groaned, before she looked up at the Medic.

"Not to worry. I'm a doctor." He said proudly. He kneeled down and moved Rainbow Dash's hands away from her leg, revealing a bleeding gash. "Nozhing to zevere. I can fix zhis." He said, aiming the Medi-gun at the girl.

"Wait, what are you doing?!" Rainbow Dash said.

Looking forward to more, your friend: Percy.

2060574 You're right. I'll be sure to fix that.

2060318 О, моя голова is pronounced like "O, moya glolova"

2061834 Well, I didn't just mean with that paragraph, I kinda meant with all of the speech. Having two people talk in the same paragraph is just confusing.

CIA

Well there goes lardo and the nurse! Who's gonna disappear next?
Hopefully not me.

Oh, I have high hopes for this fic if it keeps up like this!:moustache:

Damn you Pinkie! With the regular medigun destroyed, will medic have to build a quick-fix? Although the quick-fix is better if you are not camping behind a hoovy. :unsuresweetie:

CIA

"I am Heavy Weapons Guy. And this... is my-" He looked down expecting to find Sasha in his hands, but the only thing that followed him through the respawn system... was a sandwich.

I thought it was pronounced sandvich?

Poor Medic, he lost his Medigun.

2067716 It is, but technically still just a 'sandwich'

CIA

2067736
I've been hanging around too much:facehoof:

You said that Pinkie defines gravity, but I assume you mean defy. Also, Heavy refers to himself as "I" too much. It's more often he calls himself Heavy.

2067591

Quick-fix? Better? Hahaha. No way. Even the Kritz and Vaccinator are better.

I speaks German. So I don't need a translation.

2067778
Thought fighting Robots pays well enough.

CIA

Ahh piss!

You don't seem to understand the concept behind You're and Your. "Looks like -your- in a real pickle here", "-you're- kind are suck in god knows where", "-you're- Scout and Spy are stuck in there"

2075513Yeah.... you're right. It bugs me when I mess that up myself.

2075532 I think I have something for you. It's an auto-reviewer. It can spot stuff like those grammar mistakes.

2075924 Thanks! I'll be sure to put it to use! :pinkiehappy:

CIA

2100934
As long as I don't have to meet any bloody fruit shop owners I'll be fine.

CIA

Not that surprising that I get the floor and all, but I've slept in worse.

2116119
Well, you did shoot her owl. Kinda puts a dent into your relationship.

CIA

2116176
Meh, she looks like the type to get over it.

2116176 Tried to shoot the owl. Big difference there

Why do i sense a future MVC (Mann Versus Changeling)? :rainbowhuh:

2116541 Mare Vs. Changeling

But who knows? That just might work. :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

2116603 No, i meant mann. The mane 6 aren't used to direct combat, they will just be traumatized by the glorious amounts of ass kicknage that will occur. :pinkiecrazy:

2116609 Point taken. I don't think Rarity's fit for war anyway.:raritydespair:

2116823 Ooooh, i want to drop off Fluttershy in a trench during the WWII now... :pinkiecrazy:
For science... :twilightsheepish:

What was the reasoning behind leaving Pyro, Demo and Soldier behind? Why pair Pinkie with Heavy?

2116969 First, the BLU Pyro and Solider have played their part. I just don't feel like adding three new characters for Ponyville at this point.
Second, I just think those two go together. Makes sense with me, anyway.

You killed Medic!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

I'm not too worried. This is a story based around the RESPAWN System.

Medic puts it in a term of healing others as a side effect for his disecting work. He disected every member of his time while their sleeping is actually his true motive.

There's an error here. uber only effects on the material the medic injected as the meet the medic trailer goes. an unprotected heart will cause the heart to explode due to its heart rates spontaneous speed. Unless you would include that pinkie pie is just unusual

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