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LukeTheMercenary


The key to success is dedication and perspiration.

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This story is a sequel to The Guardian From Afar 2: Hateful Vengeance


William has become close to the Apple family. He is almost like another member, in a way. This is why Apple Bloom came to him. Complaining about..."monsters". William, being one with a kind heart, decides to investigate the issue. That decision takes him somewhere he thought he would never be again: Earth.

A secret organization is responsible for this. Are their intentions good, or bad? Whatever it may be, William is determined to escape and return to his daughter, and the mare he loves.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 50 )

A Interesting start, you got my attention.

Dark yet somehow surprising that he quickly goes well with His captors. Poor scoots though.

I pray this works. Reminds me of the first levels of RTCW

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Let me just say, that I've been playing a LOT of Wolfenstein lately. Love the series. The New Order is my fav.

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Me too, I even made a story set in the new order and the old blood, planing to do a story with RTCW and the 2009 wolfenstein.

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I'd love to see it. Send me a link?

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I can do this once it's published. Or did you mean the new order story i made?

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Okay. Here's the new order story and the old blood story. Enjoy!

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Cool! I'll get to both of them soon! Also, this vid inspired me to play Wolfenstein for some reason. Not sure why.

This vid right here...

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I see. I love the soundtracks in the games. Comment if you like, i get barely any comments. If you have any questions, I do my best to answer them.

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BTW do you have already seen the trailer for the new wolfstein?

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The Sequel to the new order

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Whelp, now I have something to look foreword to again!

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Yep, me too. Until then, I hope you enjoy my wolfenstein stories and i will inform you once the story with the 2009 and RTCW is published.

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I'll be waiting! :pinkiehappy:

And I will keep updating this current story, I have BIG plans for it now....

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Looking forward the next chapter and your comments on my 3 stories.

That reminds me of the portal scenes in Half life 1 and 2, where you must defend yourself and the scientiest until the portal is ready and where you have to stop Breen. STG44, nice choice, in WW2 games, I'm always stuck between this and the MP40. THe way the turrets work remind me of the turrets in Half life.

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Yeah. I based this scene off the part in Half Life 2, where you're in Nova Prospekt and have to use turrets to hold off the Combine guards.

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I see. I PM I sent you, just wanted to inform you about it, I hope you don't mind it.

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If you want, I can tell you more about the story in a PM

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I'll get to it soon. Before I do anything, I plan to finish this story...and then get started on the fourth/last story in the series.

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I look forward the next chapter and your next story, you're doing great work!

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Thanks...I'm kind of losing confidence in this story since there's not many people rating or commenting on it. I always want to know about what people think about my stories, and their opinions fuel ,m confidence.

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You and me both. I had the same problem but with the time, I got ratings and comments. Feturing your story in the right groups can be a major thing, but don't give up, I will read and comment, I like them very much!

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Anyways...there WILL be another story after this one, but it's gonna be a lot less sad. It's gonna be a little more comedic than the past ones. It'll focus on the lives of our human protagonists, and how that will fit in.

(Luke might not fit in...we all know that he's nuts...)

Reunited as they should, Great work!

"Whatever. My point is, you're pretty cool. I would say that I could relate to you, but I can't. Because A: I don't. And B: That would be too cliché, and this story's almost over."

Someone smack this fool!

Yeah...I'm not getting descriptive about what happened next. I'll leave that to your imagination.

Wop wop

Comment posted by LukeTheMercenary deleted Mar 9th, 2020
Comment posted by LukeTheMercenary deleted Mar 9th, 2020

I was prepared to shoot anything that looked menacing. I even had my suppressor removed...so if I fire at something, the whole family would be alerted of the incoming danger.

Yea, along with the rest of Ponyville:rainbowlaugh:

Huh, so one can get good ideas by beating up others?




...interesting.:pinkiecrazy:...

You and me baby we ain't nothing but mammals,
so let's do it like they do it on discovery channel!

Not sorry.

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*slowly backs away in chair*

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*slow claps*
Well played, my friend. Well played.

Comment posted by Kadigan deleted Mar 9th, 2020

Interesting a creature that look like a human or is a human

Good story keep up the good work

somone asked me why my eyes were red in the middle of class.
very loudly.
i switched my windows VERY quickly

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