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Von-Dragonblade


A youtuber, fanfic writer and a gamer who loves doing what he loves and loves to enjoy it. I'm a friendly guy once you get to know me. So nice to meet you all

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I have no idea of what I'm looking at. Is it odd? Is it so weird it's awesome? I can't tell.:rainbowhuh::unsuresweetie::trixieshiftright:

2053646 I don't understand what you mean :rainbowlaugh: Gotta be a little clearer than that

Well, the summary paints a confusing picture. We have a story involving a Daring Do, Lightning Dust, Lyra and a dragon going on a tragically dark, yet comedic romantic adventure, which may end up with copious amounts of sex and death.
Now, I haven't read your story yet, but I already have three different reactions.
Part of me is saying, "Hell yeah, this looks cool!":rainbowdetermined2:
Part of me is saying, "There is no way this can end well, in any sense.":facehoof:
And most of me simply says, "Huh?":rainbowhuh:

All the same, I'll end up reading it, simply so I can know what the frack is going on. Tracking.

Im kinda glad it focuses on something other than ponies but at the same time who is this really about? Ill follow for now just because it seems cool.

2058674 The story itself mainly focuses around Von and his life, but some ponies are going to be involved around him as well :pinkiesmile:

So will this be only a gore fic or will it features clop as we ll?

2058968 There will be some instances of both gore and clop, but I will mainly focus on the story

congratulations
your like/dislike ratio forms a power chord

Really like the JRPG theme you've got going here. Seriously, I can almost picture a Final Fantasy game when I read this along with the BGM. Keep it up, I look forward to more.

2078375 Thank you very much. I'll do the best I can to keep you entertained :scootangel:

Another excellent chapter, you must have played a lot of JRPGs to get the format down pat!:pinkiehappy:

Honestly though, I'm amazed at this story. I've seen a lot of potentially great stories/films/games go in the toilet because the writer/director/producer couldn't adapt to the change in mediums. This story is one of a kind, keep it up!

2148759 Thank you very much. And yes, I have played plenty of JRPGs. They are one of my favorite kinds, so I play those more than others :pinkiehappy:

am loveing it, i hope theres more rpg like fights

2221546 Worry not. I intend to make sure there are when it comes to it

"Perhaps you'll learn to respect my father....IN HELL!!!"

so campy but so much fun to read

2226432 lol well he was pretty pissed when he called him a dog

It's me! :D Good story Von. <3 Love it, can't wait for Ch. 8!! :twilightsmile: :heart: :pinkiehappy:

2383381 Thanks honey :heart: I'll try my best for you and the rest of my viewers :pinkiehappy:

If you're gonna die, Von, die with your claws around her throat.:rainbowdetermined2:

2473613 You'll get more soon, honey. be patient. All good things come in time :pinkiesmile:

USE YOUR AC-130 AIR STRIKE VON!!! DANGER CLOSE!!! (Cod Mw3- survival refference)

2495540
Eh fuck it, YOLO! (Detonates tactical nuke) :twilightsheepish:

shit just got awesome real fast to bad the crew dident come

liked him better as a hybrid more boss:eeyup:

2497396 Yeah, but that wasn't my original design for him. He was intended to be half earth pony, half dragon before. So i went back to my original concept for him :pinkiehappy: Seems to be working better

Like I said before.. "Finish Her.."
:twilightsmile:

I love how Von scares the shit out of Cynder by saying 'boo'.

2667147 I couldn't think of anything better to do for that situation except that :rainbowlaugh: Cynder already was scared shitless by this new power of his, so why not scare her more?

Can I submit an Oc to aid Von? *Warning: 1 PTSD tortured spec ops with werewolf abilities and 1 fellow halfling. But point-snake hybrid. *

3136677 Depends on the character itself. background and all

Name:Shadow Fang
Eye Color: Dark green (turns red when he becomes a wolf)
Race: Earth
Coat: White (turns black when turned into a wolf)
Mane: Black
Specialty: Skilled with his machetes, 1st (and only) prototype werewolf soldier
Armor:  blue and black dragon scale armor
Weapons: duel kukri machetes@
Mark: Black Bodark Insignia (Not located on flank, it's on his shoulder. When the mark glows red he's about to turn into the wolf)
Notable Features: The only werewolf in the military, originally from Stalliongrad but was transferred to Ponyville as a borrowed soldier, speaks with a strong Russian accent, only soldier to have a dragon scale armor (standard issued exclusively to the Stalliongrad soldiers), easily the most difficult member of the Ponyville Guard to get along with.
Bio: Not much is known about 2st Lt. Fang other then the fact that he is a loaned soldier from the Stalliongrad (he speaks with a thick Russian accent) branch and that he was experimented on for super soldier projects (Codenamed: Project Titan X), hence his Bodark mark on his shoulder that allows his to turn into a werewolf for an unlimited amount of time at the cost of fatigue and psychological damage (he becomes temporarily insane. The longer he stays a wild the longer his insanity lasts). From the feedback of the unit: he is a cold hearted, antisocial, pony due to his PTSD caused by when he lost every member of his unit and was later captured and tortured for info for 4 months before the fellow members of his SF unit (Spetsnaz) saved him. He has been a emotional wreck since then. He also disagrees with how his CO 2LT Carbon manages and trains his squad (Spetsnaz pushed their troops to the breaking point and their training is so extreme that no other SF will tolerated it due to the high number of fatalities in training.

Name: Ouroboros
Race: Unicorn
Eye Color: Purple (Left eye slittedright eye normal)
Coat: Black with dark purple vein-like designs going all over his body (possibly caused the venom in his blood inflicted by numerous snake bites), with of white scales going up his legs in a flame-like design
Mane: Spiky deep purple with black streaks
Mark: twin snakes
Armor:  Smaller scales hidden on his chest acts like a vest, snake scales act as greaves
Weapon: Controls/creates snakes, can summon a massive snake named Manda, duel machetes
Notable features: Hardly speaks to anyone unless it's important, his vein like design starts at 2 bite marks on his neck, has fang-like teeth
Bio: A unicorn from Appleloosa, Ouroboros was the childhood friend of Mobius (another one of my OCs). Until he discovered his ability to summon and manipulate venomous snakes when he was being bullied. Since then he was ran out of town and fled to the San Palomino Desert where he lived for 23 years, perfecting his skills and becoming more snakelike until he traveled to Canterlot to enlist with the RG

3140290 I'll consider it. Moreover, I am thinking about having the story redone. Not entirely. Just a certain detail. I am thinking of making everyone in the story anthrofied

3142386 cool. I love the mmo/rpg theme to dude. Really cool

3143825 PS- Shadow Fang and Ouroboros are not in relationships because:
1) Shadow Fang is paranoid, angry, sociopathic, and a emotional wreck from when his squad was killed one by one right in front of him and he was tortured
2) Ouroboros is really self conscious about the fact that he is a pony/snake hybrid (despite someponies (especially the CMC) think he's cool) due to the fact he was bullied for most of his life and driven from his home to live in the desert alone for 20+ years. It also doesn't help the fact that Gilda make fun of him to the point of him trying to kill her

Comment posted by greenboozed deleted Dec 13th, 2013

3158781 You can use Von so long as you give credit to me that he is my creation/property

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Comment posted by greenboozed deleted Dec 13th, 2013

3185531 Sounds good. And Von is 20 years old

Poor Storm! :raritycry:

Can't wait for the next chapter though :pinkiehappy:

keep up the good work!

Also I'm almost done with the second chapter of ROF, but I'm keeping Von non-anthro for story purposes if that is okay with you

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