Time.
Time is what you need, it is such a prolonged quickness. We need time to heal, we need time to die.
Time will free us from its own prisons. All things are temporary. Even Death.
Prologue
A comedic start for a serious story, if you don't like the prologue I still encourage that you give the other chapters a chance.
Light or Flight
Where the seriousness begins. Scootaloo wakes to find herself in the caverns, trying to figure out what is going on.
In The Dust
Scootaloo explores. Different Perspective introduced.
Perdition
Introduction to the city.
Grieving
Just a side part of the story that shows that her disappearance is affecting others.
Chapters (4)
In before anypony complains about the cliffhanger. This is a prologue; it's supposed to be that way.
I thought it was pretty good for just a prologue.
Rarity's a bitch....but I hate her anyway so no suprise, ah Twilight, funny as buck. Love the animal, can't spell the name worth shit
Ah.....the CMC, no matter where or who they are with, they mess things up, I love them.....sure, I'm down
This. This is good. Moar.
imma have to read this. all things are temporary, even death---already sounds good in my book. plus, yes, I agree that we are time travelers. We may not have conscious control, but we are slowly traveling through time, in the direction away from that of the big bang (or whatever). I've heard a theory that dark matter is really just matter traveling towards the big bang (traveling into the past relative to us). Just thought I'd throw these things out there because the dimensions are awesome.
Fail....at least for her, damn, this is going to get dark and crazy
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This comment is confusing me...
Is this supposed to be a negative comment or am I looking at it the wrong way?
2079991 It's supposted to be a postive comment but for Scootaloo it's a fail, you know?
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Oh.... Dam my social stupidity...
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It happens
Damn....now I hate Rarity even more, but I like the OC, something about her just seems fun for me to read about
Though I do wonder what Scoots family (if she has them) will think, I would have been so pissed if I was Rainbow, have no problem with her beating up Rarity
Ha, Spike having a feast, that very bad ass, enjoyable chapter, I liked it
Nothing wrong with the chapter but I do wish each one had more writing or descriptions ( unless off course you are trying to withhold information )
An underground city? I think Twi would wish to study that
Something seems off about the town....hmmmm.....but the way it is designed is very impressive, poor Scoots though
This wouldn't happen to be inspired by the tunnels book series would it?
Because I'd be okay with that. I really would.
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I have read them, and it seems like a very logical thing.
But the idea and chronology came to me when the lights went off while I was in the bathroom, the original idea was for Rarity though.