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[Teen Scootaloo x Teen Rumble]
“Hey, don’t be like that. You’re the most amazing filly in all of Ponyville. I do like you alot. You’re really special to me, so special that I want to be friends for as long as possible. I don’t want to screw up with you ever. It’s not that I don’t want you... It’s that I want you too much.” Rumble said as he comforted the filly he had just rejected.
Cancelled due to loss of inspiration.
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This is just the prologue sort of?
I'll get more into the main idea next chapter.
V Former Cover Art Comment V
This has the same cover art.
I think you stole it.
2761512 This is that same picture on DeviantArt
He might have taken it from the artist, however I doubt he stole it from that fan fic. Unless the artist was also the writer of that fanfic in which case he did. And if you've been on the sight and looked hard enough you would see plenty of times where people use the same cover art.
Alright, a bit fast paced but you know what, it's Rumbaloo so I can forgive it. And as for Scootaloo's character well...she's obviously older in this fic and we've never seen a teenage Scootaloo try and ask a guy out so who's to say she wouldn't act like this. I say continue it (mostly because I want more Rumbaloo).
2761512
No. I used it from the same artist and yea... I was going to use it before that fic. Let me pull up the links to the blog to prove I was going to use it before Wet Temptations came out.
When I first announced I was going to make this.
When I found out he was using it. Check the last edited dates to show I'm not lying.
2761622
Yea, it's older. Did I forget to mention that? Also, trying to avoid her cutie mark as I don't want to imprint my idea on what she should be, nor Rumble's.
2761641
Oh, ok.
Besides that, great story!
2761660
Yeah, you made it clear to me that she's older which is why I said as much.
I pretty much do the same things in my Rumbaloo fics. I do have an idea for Scootaloo's CM (though none for Rumble) but I never mention it.
I liked it. It was a bit to fast paced for my opinion but like I said,ca good story all the same. You earned the fave.
Hi! I have a group called "CMC Romance" where you post stories with any of the CMC in love! Please post your story there if you love this ship as much as I do!
P.S. Great story! I'm gonna "like" his one for sure!
i think you sud continue. this first chapter deserves (
5 Out Of 5 Happy Pinkie's)
So good I can't stop reading the first chapter scooping my second time reading it even though as short as it is it is very it drawls me in his what I'm saying can't wait to the next chapter and if it's good as the first one just a slower pace I'll give that chapter writing but for now I can't stop reading the first chapter.
Signed
Slowbro95
2829861
I'ma try to continue it :c
I haz other things to write.
2829884 I know! I just can't stop reading chapter 1. ( I'm not using Dragon sorry if i misspell words.)
I loved this chapter, Looking forward for the next chapter
2829884 I will read it right now.
2829884 It's a slower pace than the last one but still good. (
5 Out Of 5 Happy Pinkies and 
1 Out Of 5 Durpy's) (Durpy's are improvements.)
Things were disappearing there was a flash of white.
Was she in the animus?
2844533
Lol. You'll just have to wait and find out.
Poor scoots.
Great job!
2895449 Scootaloo is easy to work with because we only know a little about her.
2829884 Why did you cancell this fic? I like Scoots X Rumble stories.
Loss of inspiration....? Can i take over this story....?
5302318
I kinda thought it over, and I kinda wanted to say no because I still had the idea for how I wanted the story to go, but I realized I'd never come to create said end. You can take over the story if you wish, I don't do much on this site or in fanfiction anymore, and the chances of me continuing this story the way I want to are very slim.
5313741 Well, why don't you write anymore? If it's just because you've outgrown it or are over it, fine by me, not my choice. But if it's emotional or anything like that, just know this, i am an ear, i listen and i don't ask unless need be, so if your troubled, just send me a PM and i won't tell anyone what you say.
5313856
It's kinda both, I have BPD so my emotions are all jumbled, but the other part of it is that I really don't care for writing or anything MLP anymore.
I come back and add a little to a few stories that I wanted to finish, but other than that I'm just another ghost on this site.